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    March WIP - Fairytale Flower - final touches

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    • Meg Clayburn
      Meg Clayburn @carlianne last edited by

      @carlianne 2 feels very regal and sophisticated, whole 4 has a more young naive adventurous feel. I think it has to do with muted shades vs. Bright tints if that makes sense.

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      • carlianne
        carlianne @Meg Clayburn last edited by

        @Meg-Clayburn that does thank you!

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        • APHOTICMOTH
          APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

          I think 2 is beautiful. I like the natural color pallet.

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          • HeatherBouteneff
            HeatherBouteneff last edited by

            I like 2 and 4, 4 is so cheerful and cute but I also like the idea of an adventurer that can blend in from above and 2 feels sophisticated and graceful. I think I agree with Meg!

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              Mara Price @carlianne last edited by

              @carlianne I love 2 and 4.

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              • Julia Hegetusch
                Julia Hegetusch last edited by

                I really like your colours, I think I like 3 and 4 the most 🙂

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                • miranda-hoover
                  miranda-hoover @carlianne last edited by

                  @carlianne I like 1 and 2 the best (leaning more towards 2). 4 is cute, but reminds me a lot of Tinkerbell so it doesn't seem as unique as the others. I also like 3, but it doesn't feel as adventure-y to me.

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                  • carlianne
                    carlianne last edited by

                    Thanks everyone for your feedback!! I decided to do some more color studies as I was exploring and I think that I want her to have a ladybug steed, and I was worried option 2 won't work well there. And also I wanted to explore the style for 3 a little more to see if I could make it work as a spot illustration.

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                    obviously still rough, but let me know any thoughts here!

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                    • Kim Rosenlof
                      Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                      I love the ladybug steed! Very cute. I like all of them, but I like the complimentary colors of C. The values of the plant on her head and her face are close, so if you vary those, then I think that might work better. Great job!

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                      • jaepereira
                        jaepereira SVS OG @carlianne last edited by

                        @carlianne 2 and C. I think she’s empowering and full of adventure

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                        • Larue
                          Larue last edited by

                          I love your color palettes. I like the bright happy airy felling of A but can see C working into the story that she is well camouflaged from above (a bird snack?)

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                          • donnamakesart
                            donnamakesart @carlianne last edited by

                            @carlianne i love C haha.

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                            • LauraA
                              LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                              @carlianne Haha! You know I liked 4 the first time around, but now I like C. It's all about the contrast. I might intensify one color, though. Perhaps the green.

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                              • carlianne
                                carlianne @carlianne last edited by

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                                Not really for the contest but I wanted to practice drawing her and also wanted to practice doing some lighting

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                                • ruth
                                  ruth @carlianne last edited by

                                  @carlianne Oh this is beautiful! ♥

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                                  • Jacy13
                                    Jacy13 @carlianne last edited by

                                    @carlianne C is fantastic! 🙂 Love the ladybug.

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                                    • Neha Rawat
                                      Neha Rawat last edited by

                                      @carlianne This is so cute! I have a suggestion (I've not tried it before because I literally just thought of it)

                                      I can see you've used an overlay texture on the whole image and it's looking great! Maybe just to make it look a teeny bit better, try creating a mask of the texture for each element (background, leaves, flower, fairy) in a different orientation so that it's not obvious to the view that you've just applied a short cut overall texture.

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                                        Mara Price @carlianne last edited by

                                        @carlianne said in March WIP - Fairytale Flower - color study stage:

                                        Not really for

                                        Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful!

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                                        • carlianne
                                          carlianne @Neha Rawat last edited by

                                          @Neha-Rawat oh yeah that is what Lee says in his texture video! I should just stop being lazy 😂

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                                          • LauraA
                                            LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                                            I love it!! I think this iteration shifted it into another gear altogether.

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