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    March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!

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    • Melissa_Bailey
      Melissa_Bailey @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

      @Georgios-Christopoulos really nice sketches. Love how you play with shapes.

      Just want to share my initial impression, as it might be helpful.

      At first glance, to me, this character looks a lot like Winslow your yeti, without the beard. Perhaps adding color might make them more different, but they feel very much like they could be related or live in the same world.

      On the flip side, your style is very recognizable, so that's a good thing! I knew it was your work before seeing your name.

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

        @Christina-Kal thanks christina!!happy to meet you here!
        @miranda-hoover Thanks Miranda!!
        @Melissa-Bailey-0 Thanks Melissa!That is actually pretty true!Based on your opinion I changed him a bit, because I see your point.
        I don t want adding colour to make the difference between the designs, so it was a pretty constructive comment.Thanks!!Ps, Check the next design and give me your opinion if you could!!

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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          Lyon Deofol! (Apollyon Deofol)
          Or I think he is!!Maybe I ll change the name later, but the design grew up on me!

          So, Lyon is an albino Devil kid, who lives in a peaceful underground demon village.
          So events occured and this kid was tasked to find the legendary demon warrior,Oni, in order to save his village from the imminent attack of these despicable Goblin-Angels , who live above the clouds!

          Basic design is done, now it s time to work on poses,clothing, Equipment and all the fun stuff!!

          Opinions are welcome!!!

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          • jenithornhill
            jenithornhill last edited by

            I think they are all great, and your character is developing well. You should keep the initial sketches handy, as I think the first character in the 2nd row will be a fantastic Hero, just incase one of the future assignments in this set calls
            for drawing him/her.

            Jennifer Thornhill
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            • Georgios Christopoulos
              Georgios Christopoulos @jenithornhill last edited by

              @jenithornhill thanks! I agree, but the influences of Link from Zelda are too strong on him.. Thanks for the words! You are awesome!

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                Some more designs before entering the layout and detailed sketch mode!!
                Getting to know the character more and more!!

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  @Georgios-Christopoulos Nice! I'm lovin' all the time you're takin' on preliminary design stuff πŸ™‚

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                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                    Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett thanks Braden!! Also love that about your stuff. Also adding the sketches and notes is such nice touch! PS the llama rocks!

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      Heyo team!
                      Need some opinions on this one colourwise!!
                      Which one do you prefer??

                      A The idea behind this colour choice is that the character is an Albino demon!
                      B.This is the regular coloured Demon.
                      C.This is the more "human like"demon, so he can blend more with humans in his travels(personally it is the least preferable one)

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                      • Jacy13
                        Jacy13 @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos I prefer B πŸ™‚

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                        • Georgios Christopoulos
                          Georgios Christopoulos @Jacy13 last edited by

                          @Jacy13 thanks!!

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                            @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

                            Heyo team!
                            Need some opinions on this one colourwise!!
                            Which one do you prefer??

                            A The idea behind this colour choice is that the character is an Albino demon!
                            B.This is the regular coloured Demon.
                            C.This is the more "human like"demon, so he can blend more with humans in his travels(personally it is the least preferable one)

                            TRAVELLER8.jpg

                            If you're going for a devilish vibe I think B is definitely the options. The blue eye looks great in option C. Could you try green eyes in option B? Have a nice spot of complimentary colour?

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                            • Georgios Christopoulos
                              Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

                                @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

                                My order would go B-C---A for myself. A just doesn't ring with me for some reason πŸ™‚

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                                • Georgios Christopoulos
                                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                  Hey fellas!
                                  Working on inks,general layout and colour flats!

                                  Critique is always neat!

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                                  • Georgios Christopoulos
                                    Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                    More basic colours!

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                                    • jaepereira
                                      jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                      @Georgios-Christopoulos In the grand scheme of things i'm pretty sure it doesn't matter, but the boss there having a tie and button up seems very out of place.

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                                      • Georgios Christopoulos
                                        Georgios Christopoulos @jaepereira last edited by

                                        @jaepereira you mean, bureaucracy doesn't affect fantasy adventures with demons and angels??? 😊😊😊

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                                        • jaepereira
                                          jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                          @Georgios-Christopoulos touchΓ©

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