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    March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!

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    • Jacy13
      Jacy13 @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

      @Georgios-Christopoulos I prefer B 🙂

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos @Jacy13 last edited by

        @Jacy13 thanks!!

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        • braden H
          braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

          Heyo team!
          Need some opinions on this one colourwise!!
          Which one do you prefer??

          A The idea behind this colour choice is that the character is an Albino demon!
          B.This is the regular coloured Demon.
          C.This is the more "human like"demon, so he can blend more with humans in his travels(personally it is the least preferable one)

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          If you're going for a devilish vibe I think B is definitely the options. The blue eye looks great in option C. Could you try green eyes in option B? Have a nice spot of complimentary colour?

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          • Georgios Christopoulos
            Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

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            • braden H
              braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

              @Georgios-Christopoulos said in March traveler First approach!! Would love some feedback!:

              @Braden-Hallett yes, green eyes on B are a good idea. What is your thoughts on A? With a bit more grayish (I mean really light gray) for the skin, would you think it works?

              My order would go B-C---A for myself. A just doesn't ring with me for some reason 🙂

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                Hey fellas!
                Working on inks,general layout and colour flats!

                Critique is always neat!

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                • Georgios Christopoulos
                  Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                  More basic colours!

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                  • jaepereira
                    jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                    @Georgios-Christopoulos In the grand scheme of things i'm pretty sure it doesn't matter, but the boss there having a tie and button up seems very out of place.

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos @jaepereira last edited by

                      @jaepereira you mean, bureaucracy doesn't affect fantasy adventures with demons and angels??? 😊😊😊

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                      • jaepereira
                        jaepereira SVS OG @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos touché

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                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                            Georgios Christopoulos last edited by Georgios Christopoulos

                            Almost there. I am sure I ll tweek some more with this character design sheet but let's leave it to rest now for a couple of days.
                            Made two versions,one with plain white and one with grainy paper texture.

                            What do you think guys?

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                              @Georgios-Christopoulos I prefer the grainy paper texture! It lets the word balloons pop a bit compared to the plain white 🙂

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                              • Georgios Christopoulos
                                Georgios Christopoulos @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett thanks man! that's what I was thinking. Though I have some thoughts that maybe it becomes "too much".

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