hey friends! need advice and critique for this one

[Declan Konesky]

@Declan-Konesky I take back the frets thing! I couldn't see them well earlier sorry!

[Kim Hunter]

My eye first landed on the tangent between the corner of the porch roofline and the house. Fun pic though. It has a happy feel.

[Manuel Mal]

@RachelArmington thank you! ill try and fix it up and adjust some things

[Manuel Mal]

@Melissa-Bailey-0 i made the eyes closed because i wanted them to look like they're really enjoying playing music. ill try to add a bit more clarity to that. thank youuu!!

[Manuel Mal]

@Asyas_illos hmm a porch light! great idea, ill try to see what i could do. Thank you tho!

[Manuel Mal]

@Declan-Konesky those are fair points! thanks for that! i wanted the girl in the middle to focus at her guitar but didnt know that she came out looking kinda cross-eyed. oof. ill try to adjust that one then.

Thank you!

[Manuel Mal]

@Kim-Hunter huh. i guess that needs adjusting then. thank you!!

[Morten Christiansen]

The perspective of the roof on the right hand side seems a bit off. Of course the roof "tiling" could be intentionally misaligned, but my gut reaction is that all the lines would converge on the same point, since roofs are usually straight. I've drawn the lines which I would expect to converge:

[Morten Christiansen]

I realize that your style may not require super realistic perspective, it just jumped out at me.

[Manuel Mal]

@Morten-Christiansen hmm yeaa. thanks for pointing that out man, really appreciate it