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    May 2021 Contest WIP Feedback Kindly Requested

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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo @Jeremy Ross last edited by

      @Jeremy-Ross it looks great. The spiders legs are a lot clearer now the crows have gone so it looks more spider-y by just doing that without the need to add the extra facial features 👍

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      • Georgios Christopoulos
        Georgios Christopoulos @Jeremy Ross last edited by

        @Jeremy-Ross the concept and composition is beautiful! Good Luck with it!!!

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        • Jeremy Ross
          Jeremy Ross @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          Thank you @Georgios-Christopoulos and @lizardillo!

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          • Melissa_Bailey
            Melissa_Bailey @Jeremy Ross last edited by

            @Jeremy-Ross really nice! The lighting makes SUCH a difference. Great job!

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

              Thank you so much @Melissa-Bailey-0! I really appreciate you taking your time to offer feedback throughout my revisions.

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              • TaniaGomesArt
                TaniaGomesArt @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                @Jeremy-Ross It looks really great! I'm really at the beginning of my journey, so a lot of times I don't have much feedback to give in terms of improving, but is so interesting to see how these small changes make such a difference!! Good luck for the contest. ☺

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                • ellenseal_art
                  ellenseal_art last edited by ellenseal_art

                  @Jeremy-Ross So fun! I love how the spider is scary but also somehow adorable? Perfect children's book balance! I'm also obsessed with her little spur earrings that match the ones on her shoes. Such a fun little detail. Best of luck in the contest!

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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @TaniaGomesArt last edited by

                    Thank you for your kind words @TaniaGomesArt! Often times, I complete my piece at the 11th hour and lose the opportunity for feedback from this wonderful community.

                    Feedback is such a wonderful gift!

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                    • Jeremy Ross
                      Jeremy Ross @ellenseal_art last edited by

                      Hi @ellenseal14, thank you for your kind words! I drew a super scary spider as an alternative; however, it just didn’t feel cohesive so I stuck with a furry big-eyed toothy monster spider.

                      Her earrings are pretty cute!

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                      • frankiiij
                        frankiiij last edited by

                        Whoa! This is so amazing!

                        Much love and God bless!

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                        • Jeremy Ross
                          Jeremy Ross @frankiiij last edited by

                          Thank you so much @frankiiij! I was very lucky to get some incredible feedback from the group.

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