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    • Oana
      Oana @Larue last edited by

      @Larue
      @Rachel-Horne
      Thank you! This helps šŸ™‚

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      • Oana
        Oana last edited by

        So, still at doodling stage but I feel I am closer... I tried to incorporate my client's (daughter) observation (he should be hairy) and gave him a nautical look because he is an aquatical animal. I also think I will go with a long tail as muskrats have, the short one is not working and makes him look like a hamster.
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        • Oana
          Oana last edited by Oana

          I’m still loosely sketching Albert trying to find the other poses… not easy! Seems his main feature are the wiskers and it’s tricky getting those in perspective! šŸ˜… I also notice I shrunk his head over time… I’ll try to get the head size from the previous drawing, looks more ā€œmuskratā€ like that… well now he looks like a mouse..back to the drawing board šŸ™‚
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          • RachelArmington
            RachelArmington last edited by

            His long tail is very expressive!

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            • Oana
              Oana @RachelArmington last edited by

              @RachelArmington Thanks, I like it too over the short one! My problem is he seems to get less "Musk" and more "Rat" every time I redraw him šŸ˜‘ I'll try to go back some steps and look at some muskrat pictures again. Muskrats do look like large rats....😱

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              • Oana
                Oana last edited by

                Not much time left and I am still not sure how to render the final drawing, but at least I managed to finish the page composition and I’m done twitching Albert’s shape and proportions! I like it, family likes it… I’ll try not to stray far from this sketchy look but rhight now it just looks toooo sketchyā€¦šŸ˜•
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                • RachelArmington
                  RachelArmington last edited by

                  I love how loose he is...the lines add motion to the figure (as in the marvelous tail)! e6de6f95-4c56-4168-ac54-4945248c733c-image.png

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                  • willicreate
                    willicreate last edited by

                    I agree with RachealArmington, the looseness of the drawings are great. Your handling reminds me of the wonderful art in the Disney Short Burrow. I don't think you need to render at all, just play with tones and clean the lines.

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                    • Oana
                      Oana @willicreate last edited by

                      @willicreate @RachelArmington Thank you! This coloring and finishing part is something I have less experience with, but this is the time to learn šŸ™‚ I didn’t know Burrow, thanks for the reference!

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                      • Oana
                        Oana last edited by Oana

                        My submited character sheet! It was a great exercise and I am happy with the results. I feel it does not look too original but it is a feat for me to be able to put together an image like this, colors and all. My daughter watched closely the whole way and at one point she even took the stylus from me and demonstrated her idea of fur rendering, wich actually was very good and I used 😃

                        Albert the Muskrat.JPG

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                        • willicreate
                          willicreate last edited by

                          It's a sweet looking character. Nice rendering and storytelling. Easily works for animation.

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                          • Oana
                            Oana @willicreate last edited by

                            @willicreate Thank you! I actually have a kind of animated version of my subject in my head when I draw šŸ™‚

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                            • Oana
                              Oana last edited by Oana

                              I have been watching the ā€œCreative compositionā€ class so I am trying to go through the thumbnails process to get Albert a home! I’m posting some of the 10000 thumbnail sketches as a wip though they are not much to look at yet… Actually I had started with too much detail, then I got to the discussion about thumbnails and realised it is a much better idea. Hope I make it in time.

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                              • Oana
                                Oana last edited by

                                Moving on from thumbnails to a more decided composition sketch, with a bit of a shot at values. I think I will put Albert in the image, and for added fun, my daughter Eva šŸ™‚ I'll be off on vacation before the end of the month, I hope I will be able to finish this...

                                Albert house small.JPG

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                                • Fey Realme
                                  Fey Realme @Oana last edited by

                                  @Oana wow this is stunning! I was reading through the thread I agree with everyone-- I LOVE HOW EXPRESSIVE everything is! Your sketches of Albert, his finished design, the lighting now in his house design and the whole feel of this color study. there is an artist I really admire called Jo Rioux who draws in a very sketchy way but it still looks finished and so beautiful, here is a link to a video she did on her process--it is mostly traditional but i'm sure there is an application for the process in digital media also.
                                  https://jorioux.com/faq/

                                  Blog: mamatheartist.blogspot.com
                                  Coloring page newsletter: https://bit.ly/Color-in

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                                  • Oana
                                    Oana @Fey Realme last edited by

                                    @R-Fey-Realme Thank you, and thank you for the link, I did not know the artist and I love that style! Process videos are useful across traditional/digital media I think. It is easier for me to get a finished image in digital, but I think I work in procreate much as I was on paper, with the perks of course of "undo" and "layers"... šŸ™‚ and I always start sketching ideas on paper first.

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