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    • Kim Rosenlof
      Kim Rosenlof @Oana last edited by Kim Rosenlof

      @Oana I like your muskrat! Very cute!

      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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      • RachelArmington
        RachelArmington last edited by

        These are adorable...I love the direction you are going with the sheet of muskrats in overalls, but for some reason my favorite is the expression of the muskrat wearing the flat hat 453c1840-4626-4cef-b640-65e8eb4ffcb5-image.png .

        Personally, I agree with your daughter about muskrats. They are noble creatures in Algonquin creation myths, and peacefully coexist with beavers (in beaver lodges). Pretty cool animals.

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        • Oana
          Oana @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

          @Kim-Rosenlof said in Albert the Muskrat WIP:

          @Oana I like your muskrat! Very cute!
          Thank you! 🙂

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          • Oana
            Oana @RachelArmington last edited by

            @RachelArmington Thank you! 🙂 I think the looped smile gives him more cheek. We saw muskrats by the river in Prague coming out of the water and approaching people like domesticated animals, they looked very cute, though larger than I expected so a bit intimidating 🙂

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            • Larue
              Larue last edited by

              So adorable, nuff said:)

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              • Rachel Horne
                Rachel Horne last edited by

                Very cute - love him especially in the bottom right pictures

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                • Oana
                  Oana @Larue last edited by

                  @Larue
                  @Rachel-Horne
                  Thank you! This helps 🙂

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                  • Oana
                    Oana last edited by

                    So, still at doodling stage but I feel I am closer... I tried to incorporate my client's (daughter) observation (he should be hairy) and gave him a nautical look because he is an aquatical animal. I also think I will go with a long tail as muskrats have, the short one is not working and makes him look like a hamster.
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                    • Oana
                      Oana last edited by Oana

                      I’m still loosely sketching Albert trying to find the other poses… not easy! Seems his main feature are the wiskers and it’s tricky getting those in perspective! 😅 I also notice I shrunk his head over time… I’ll try to get the head size from the previous drawing, looks more “muskrat” like that… well now he looks like a mouse..back to the drawing board 🙂
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                      • RachelArmington
                        RachelArmington last edited by

                        His long tail is very expressive!

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                        • Oana
                          Oana @RachelArmington last edited by

                          @RachelArmington Thanks, I like it too over the short one! My problem is he seems to get less "Musk" and more "Rat" every time I redraw him 😑 I'll try to go back some steps and look at some muskrat pictures again. Muskrats do look like large rats....😱

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                          • Oana
                            Oana last edited by

                            Not much time left and I am still not sure how to render the final drawing, but at least I managed to finish the page composition and I’m done twitching Albert’s shape and proportions! I like it, family likes it… I’ll try not to stray far from this sketchy look but rhight now it just looks toooo sketchy…😕
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                            • RachelArmington
                              RachelArmington last edited by

                              I love how loose he is...the lines add motion to the figure (as in the marvelous tail)! e6de6f95-4c56-4168-ac54-4945248c733c-image.png

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                              • willicreate
                                willicreate last edited by

                                I agree with RachealArmington, the looseness of the drawings are great. Your handling reminds me of the wonderful art in the Disney Short Burrow. I don't think you need to render at all, just play with tones and clean the lines.

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                                • Oana
                                  Oana @willicreate last edited by

                                  @willicreate @RachelArmington Thank you! This coloring and finishing part is something I have less experience with, but this is the time to learn 🙂 I didn’t know Burrow, thanks for the reference!

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                                  • Oana
                                    Oana last edited by Oana

                                    My submited character sheet! It was a great exercise and I am happy with the results. I feel it does not look too original but it is a feat for me to be able to put together an image like this, colors and all. My daughter watched closely the whole way and at one point she even took the stylus from me and demonstrated her idea of fur rendering, wich actually was very good and I used 😃

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                                    • willicreate
                                      willicreate last edited by

                                      It's a sweet looking character. Nice rendering and storytelling. Easily works for animation.

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                                      • Oana
                                        Oana @willicreate last edited by

                                        @willicreate Thank you! I actually have a kind of animated version of my subject in my head when I draw 🙂

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                                        • Oana
                                          Oana last edited by Oana

                                          I have been watching the “Creative composition” class so I am trying to go through the thumbnails process to get Albert a home! I’m posting some of the 10000 thumbnail sketches as a wip though they are not much to look at yet… Actually I had started with too much detail, then I got to the discussion about thumbnails and realised it is a much better idea. Hope I make it in time.

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                                          • Oana
                                            Oana last edited by

                                            Moving on from thumbnails to a more decided composition sketch, with a bit of a shot at values. I think I will put Albert in the image, and for added fun, my daughter Eva 🙂 I'll be off on vacation before the end of the month, I hope I will be able to finish this...

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