Perspective Drawing Feedback

[ambria]

Hey everyone! I was hoping I could get some feedback on this drawing. It's a pretty rough sketch of my room. I just wanted to practice perspective and a little bit of shadow. I chose the lamp, (big rectangular prism in the right edge) as my only light source. I only saw a couple places to put shadows. How did I do? Does everything look ok? Also it's not very detailed because I drew it pretty small on my paper, so I could put my vanishing points far out. Thanks!

[Nico Ecenarro]

@ambria I did a quick draw over to show my biggest fix. For this 2 point all you verticals should be straight up and down (unless posters are crooked, but they’d still follow perspective). Overlapping items builds on the space too. I forgot the lamp was a lamp . This sort of practice is great and I want to high five you for practicing it!

[ambria]

@Nico-Ecenarro Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!