Portfolio Illustration suggestions
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@tessaw I saved the original but I I think I’m going back to scratch. From the sketch anyway and start over on the color. I want to carry over a lot of the colors from the rabbit hole illustration into the tweedles yet transition to more blues and purples.
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@heather-boyd thanks for the feedback! The tweedles scene is from the original Disney film I’m not sure it’s literally in the book as I have not read it since high school but I didn’t totally want her as the focal point anyway in this particular illustration. I will tweak the lighting a bit for the rabbit hole illustration maybe that will create a better focal point. Thanks!
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I re-sketched the tweedles and I think I’m happier with them now, but I’m still going to rethink my colors.
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Ok honest opinions please! I struggled with this a lot for some reason, with character design and color. If you have anything suggestions on what I could’ve done differently please let me know
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@asyas_illos I think maybe there is something missing story wise. Are they playing hide and seek? Why is Alice in the log? It would be good if that was more clear. I like that you switched tweedle dee and tweedle dum to be little kids. That's a fun change from the Disney version. I am excited to see what other illustrations you do with the Alice in Wonderland story!
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@lisa-clark thank you for your feedback! She is supposed to be searching for the white rabbit but you aren’t the first to say that so maybe I should find a way to incorporate the rabbit somewhere. Thank you again very helpful
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A couple of you mentioned why is she in the log? what’s the story? While I figured it was obvious because of the movie, I wasn’t thinking like an illustrator and it was lacking in story. So I added the rabbit in two different poses because that’s who she’s been searching for, but I’m not sure which I like better. I asked my kids and got mixed answers. Any thoughts?
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@asyas_illos super cute style, I just think the view of Alice’s bum is very awkward, but I think the view of the rabbit’s bum/feet running away works
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Ok I think I’m gonna call it on this one and I feel much better about it. Thanks for the feedback everyone who spoke up, it really helped me!
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@asyas_illos So much clearer! I love it. That made all the difference!
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I initially wanted this one to be a spot illustration but I got carried away… again
