Wip tiger 22

[Kim Rosenlof]

@asyas_illos This is looking good and I really like how you have a unique take on the theme of tiger. The path and the edge of the light are almost touching and looks like a tangent right now. Also, the composition is almost cut in half. I recommend shifting the tiger and light area to the left a little so it is more asymmetrical. Great job!

[lizardillo]

This is great. I like the fact you've not just gone with an actual tiger and gone a different route.

[Asyas_illos]

@lizardillo thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

I watched moana again recently with my daughters and really wanted to incorporate a giant being into the tiger prompt, so with that in mind went with a moana meets avatar kind of thing ,cuz I love avatar the last air bender and why not? The idea is that this girl is doing her thing and calling upon the great tiger spirit on top of this mountain or cliff. But the travesty here is that I know it’s lacking in story. Obviously it’s unfinished, so if anybody has any feedback or feelings on this piece in general please feel free to share with me!

[Asyas_illos]

I added some mountains to the background and some birds, to hopefully add some height?

[Lisa Clark]

@asyas_illos This piece feels more like the tiger is made of water and the girl is standing right next to a body of water. Maybe it would look more like a cliff if the land can show through the wispy air more?

As for the story, maybe if you had a second character next to her that could tell more of a story. Someone wounded? Or someone ready to attack her?? Just throwing out some ideas!

[Asyas_illos]

@lisa-clark thank you I was worried about it looking like water… thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

@asyas_illos so here’s before and after adding more cliff below, I’m not sure if it looks more like water now?

[Asyas_illos]

I decided to keep the bottom how it was I thought looked too much like a reflection, but I did add some other spirits to insinuate she’s communing with the spirit world. Any last thoughts? I think I’m pretty much done.

[jenn]

@asyas_illos Your characters are so appealing. I am late to the party but I am in agreement with the option that you ended up choosing for the Jade tiger. The Avatar tiger is a cool concept, and the motion and colors are lovely. The glow on the cliffs in the background adds even more drama.

[Asyas_illos]

@jenn thank you I do love character design!

[Lisa Clark]

@asyas_illos I really love that you added more spirits! That's really cool. I really love this newer style too. It's gorgeous!!

[Asyas_illos]

@lisa-clark thank you, I didn’t draw for a looong time this past year, but I did do a lot research on where I wanted to go with my style I feel like I’m almost there…