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    • DoodleMick
      DoodleMick @Cayleen last edited by

      @cayleen Thank you, I am in the process of doing another revision, and would love to get in contact with you at that time if your still interested.

      Thanks again.

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      • Cayleen
        Cayleen @DoodleMick last edited by

        @doodlemick You bet! Maybe tag me here to let me know when you’re ready just so I don’t miss it in my email.

        Cayleen Blackmore

        cayleencreates.com
        https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @DoodleMick last edited by

          @doodlemick I’ll give mine too if you want I have never published but I’ve been creative writing for about years. Henrybellery3@gmail.com sorry it’s long and awkward lol

          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz last edited by

            Mine is evarartistry@gmail.com

            www.evarartistry.com
            www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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            • DoodleMick
              DoodleMick last edited by DoodleMick

              @AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos @Cayleen
              I think I am ready to send out version 13 of my "Dexter Doesn't Quit" Picture Book Manuscript. Are you three still willing to give honest feedback and harsh critiques if required?

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @DoodleMick last edited by

                @DoodleMick You got it!

                Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                • Cayleen
                  Cayleen @DoodleMick last edited by

                  @doodlemick You bet!

                  Cayleen Blackmore

                  cayleencreates.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                  • DoodleMick
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                    • DoodleMick
                      DoodleMick @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @asyas_illos Sent

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                        DoodleMick @Cayleen last edited by

                        @cayleen Sent

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                        • AngelinaKizz
                          AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @doodlemick you bet!

                          www.evarartistry.com
                          www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                          • DoodleMick
                            DoodleMick @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                            @angelinakizz Sent

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                            • AngelinaKizz
                              AngelinaKizz @DoodleMick last edited by

                              @doodlemick responded, looking forward to it.

                              www.evarartistry.com
                              www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                              • DoodleMick
                                DoodleMick last edited by DoodleMick

                                I Just wanted to personally thank @Frogpunzel @AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos and @Cayleen for taking the time to read through and critique my picture book manuscript. I would like to see more options for Manuscript Critiquing like this on SVSLearn if possible.

                                I am taking all your comments to heart and will be working on an update version soon.

                                Thanks again.

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                                • Melissa_Bailey
                                  Melissa_Bailey @DoodleMick last edited by

                                  @doodlemick not sure if this is too late or not, especially since you might not want too many critique partners -- too many cooks, and all that. But I'm willing to read it through and give you honest feedback. I'm a published author-illustrator and have experience editing picture books. You can contact me via my website link, below this message.

                                  Something you might want to seriously consider is joining SCBWI (the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators) if you haven't already. There is a wealth of information in The Book (which is updated every year), conventions, and webinars that help authors and illustrators hone their craft. I also found my critique group through my regional SCBWI chapter. It's a great resource that I have personally found well worth the membership fee.

                                  illustrator - author - smiley person
                                  mbaileyart.com
                                  instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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                                  • DoodleMick
                                    DoodleMick @Melissa_Bailey last edited by DoodleMick

                                    @melissa_bailey Thank you for the offer. I would like to make a few revisions and reach back out to you in a week or so it your still interested.

                                    I have heard of the SCBWI, but I have not yet looked into them. I am currently taking the Children’s Book Pro course, and I want to focus on that course and my manuscript for now.

                                    Thank You

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                                    • Melissa_Bailey
                                      Melissa_Bailey @DoodleMick last edited by

                                      @doodlemick sure! I should have time in a week or so -- just finished up a big project and am taking a little breather. 😊 Send it on when you're ready!

                                      illustrator - author - smiley person
                                      mbaileyart.com
                                      instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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