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      Frogpunzel @DoodleMick last edited by

      @doodlemick I'd be happy to take a look sometime this next week. Disclaimer... I am not a pro. I have spent years reading childrens books though, and might be able to help by just being a fresh set of eyes.

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        DoodleMick @Frogpunzel last edited by

        @frogpunzel Thank You, that would be great. How does this work? Do I just post it, or send it to you in PDF? What's the protocol here? I have never done this before. This is my first children's book as well, so I am not even 100% sure I even have the manuscript layout done correctly. What do you feel most comfortable with?

        Thanks again for the assist.

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          Frogpunzel @DoodleMick last edited by

          @doodlemick I think I can send you my email over a chat in the forum if you want to email it to me. I will give it a try, let me know if it works.

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz last edited by

            Hi Mick,
            I’d be happy to give a look over. I’m currently taking a university course on writing picture books and it would also help me put my skills to use, to look through someone else’s writing and offer insight.

            www.evarartistry.com
            www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              I don't think there's a problem if you post it here, I know many of us would love to share our opinions with you and help push you along your path. Maybe just input a link?

              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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              • Cayleen
                Cayleen last edited by

                I like to write too and would be happy to take a look, if you’re still looking for feedback. cayleenrae@gmail.com

                Cayleen Blackmore

                cayleencreates.com
                https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                  DoodleMick @Cayleen last edited by

                  @cayleen Thank you, I am in the process of doing another revision, and would love to get in contact with you at that time if your still interested.

                  Thanks again.

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                    Cayleen @DoodleMick last edited by

                    @doodlemick You bet! Maybe tag me here to let me know when you’re ready just so I don’t miss it in my email.

                    Cayleen Blackmore

                    cayleencreates.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @DoodleMick last edited by

                      @doodlemick I’ll give mine too if you want I have never published but I’ve been creative writing for about years. Henrybellery3@gmail.com sorry it’s long and awkward lol

                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz last edited by

                        Mine is evarartistry@gmail.com

                        www.evarartistry.com
                        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                        • DoodleMick
                          DoodleMick last edited by DoodleMick

                          @AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos @Cayleen
                          I think I am ready to send out version 13 of my "Dexter Doesn't Quit" Picture Book Manuscript. Are you three still willing to give honest feedback and harsh critiques if required?

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                            Asyas_illos @DoodleMick last edited by

                            @DoodleMick You got it!

                            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                              Cayleen @DoodleMick last edited by

                              @doodlemick You bet!

                              Cayleen Blackmore

                              cayleencreates.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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                                  DoodleMick @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @asyas_illos Sent

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                                    DoodleMick @Cayleen last edited by

                                    @cayleen Sent

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                                    • AngelinaKizz
                                      AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                      @doodlemick you bet!

                                      www.evarartistry.com
                                      www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                                        DoodleMick @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                        @angelinakizz Sent

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                                          AngelinaKizz @DoodleMick last edited by

                                          @doodlemick responded, looking forward to it.

                                          www.evarartistry.com
                                          www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                                          • DoodleMick
                                            DoodleMick last edited by DoodleMick

                                            I Just wanted to personally thank @Frogpunzel @AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos and @Cayleen for taking the time to read through and critique my picture book manuscript. I would like to see more options for Manuscript Critiquing like this on SVSLearn if possible.

                                            I am taking all your comments to heart and will be working on an update version soon.

                                            Thanks again.

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