Manuscript Critiques

DoodleMick

Good Morning, Afternoon or Evening everyone

I completed the “Writing Picture Books” Course, and I think I have a “Ready to Share” copy of my manuscript that I would like to get some feedback on. I also completed a dummy copy that I am going to have family and friends take a look at. I would like to have someone else who doesn’t know me and has a better understanding of the Do’s and Don’ts of the industry to review my writing ability. (Or-lack-there-of). I am looking for complete honesty and I accept any and all harsh comments/critiques.

What is the best way of accomplishing this? Should I post it on the Forum or some other location? My manuscript is just right around 600 words

“Give it to me straight doctor, I can take it”
by the late Dr Johnny Fever at WKRP

Thank You
Mick

Frogpunzel

@doodlemick I'd be happy to take a look sometime this next week. Disclaimer... I am not a pro. I have spent years reading childrens books though, and might be able to help by just being a fresh set of eyes.

DoodleMick

@frogpunzel Thank You, that would be great. How does this work? Do I just post it, or send it to you in PDF? What's the protocol here? I have never done this before. This is my first children's book as well, so I am not even 100% sure I even have the manuscript layout done correctly. What do you feel most comfortable with?

Thanks again for the assist.

Frogpunzel

@doodlemick I think I can send you my email over a chat in the forum if you want to email it to me. I will give it a try, let me know if it works.

AngelinaKizz

Hi Mick,
I’d be happy to give a look over. I’m currently taking a university course on writing picture books and it would also help me put my skills to use, to look through someone else’s writing and offer insight.

Asyas_illos

I don't think there's a problem if you post it here, I know many of us would love to share our opinions with you and help push you along your path. Maybe just input a link?

Cayleen

I like to write too and would be happy to take a look, if you’re still looking for feedback. cayleenrae@gmail.com

DoodleMick

@cayleen Thank you, I am in the process of doing another revision, and would love to get in contact with you at that time if your still interested.

Thanks again.

Cayleen

@doodlemick You bet! Maybe tag me here to let me know when you’re ready just so I don’t miss it in my email.

Asyas_illos

@doodlemick I’ll give mine too if you want I have never published but I’ve been creative writing for about years. Henrybellery3@gmail.com sorry it’s long and awkward lol

AngelinaKizz

Mine is evarartistry@gmail.com

DoodleMick

@AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos @Cayleen
I think I am ready to send out version 13 of my "Dexter Doesn't Quit" Picture Book Manuscript. Are you three still willing to give honest feedback and harsh critiques if required?

Asyas_illos

@DoodleMick You got it!

Cayleen

@doodlemick You bet!

DoodleMick

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DoodleMick

@asyas_illos Sent

DoodleMick

@cayleen Sent

AngelinaKizz

@doodlemick you bet!

DoodleMick

@angelinakizz Sent

AngelinaKizz

@doodlemick responded, looking forward to it.