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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @asyas_illos that definitely helps bring across the statue! Try the thought bubble on a separate layer and see how it feels. Can’t hurt.

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        Ok need some opinions now, I’ve got thought bubble or just text, also the bird, squinty eye showing the action of what he’s doing ( in case you couldn’t see it) or no squinty eyes? And does the text fit, with the style or is it too indifferent?
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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Ok one down I submitted my lucky cat illo going off what my kids liked, which was with the white bubble, and the birds eyes open here’s the final.
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          Also moving along I’ve only got to add the speech text to the lucky rabbits foot before I finalize.
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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            I’m trying to find the best placement for Lucky foots response any thoughts?
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

              See a penny pick it up, all day long you’ll have good luck! Started this one today, the shadows in the back will be ill defined people and their spots are not certain yet.
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Hey guys I’m wondering if you think I should keep the original or try this blur out. It’s the first time I’ve played with it. My aim it to only color the kid and his dog everything else is going to stay monochromatic values pretty much.
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Here’s without
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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Ok moving on I think
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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @asyas_illos fabulous!

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                        • jenn
                          jenn @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos your prolific-ness is such an inspiration!! Your treatment of all of these concepts are lovely, memorable and very consistent in style. Sorry to hear of your car mishap.

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                            Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by

                            @jenn thanks for the sympathy😊it was a bummer but, these illustrations are the result of the much needed artistic therapy from it.

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                              Asyas_illos @jenn last edited by Asyas_illos

                              @jenn I also greatly enjoy the one word prompts it leaves so much more space to be creative.

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                              • Asyas_illos
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                                Working on another entry with a lucky goldfish as the theme and I’ve narrowed it down to these two roughs any thoughts on composition or which you like more? They will be spot illustrations not full page
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Or if there is another POV you think I should try?

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                    I like both of these view points but I'm trying to vary the povs I do because I tend to do a lot of straight on angles, so I’m going to work with this one for now. So goldfish are known to be symbols of luck and prosperity, my story is this little girl going to buy a lucky goldfish, who coincidentally is the ugliest fish in the tank, so he is also feeling lucky for being chosen. Although that last bit might be a bit harder to illustrate from this angle, I guess we’ll see how it goes! I also am eliminating hard line work except for detailing and just using paint this time and I found a brush that I am loving giving a scratchy feel. Ok enough gabbing…9B61114A-0790-4364-822D-1035777F36FB.jpeg

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                                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                      I'm wondering if adding these guys Will distract from the main story and create too many focal points. What do you think? I fell in love with some toucan shoes and now I want to put them everywhere lol, help me! I was kinda hoping the vibe would be like “out of all the things in this pet store she wants the plain old goldfish…”
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                                      • Asyas_illos
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                                        So this is where I am today, still struggling with the storytelling I think. Right now its just a girl buying a goldfish, any ides how I can elaborate? Maybe a parent in the background trying to persuade her to get something else? I don't want to over complicate it but I know it needs something else… a toucan maybe? 😂
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                                        • Asyas_illos
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                                          So finally found my story with the goldfish… tell me what you see based off this very rough sketch. (Knowing goldfish are supposed to be good luck of course)
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                                            Does this perspective seem ok? I brought it out a tiny bit so it could breathe a little more. I’ve never been good with perspective I think it’s like a math thing, I can’t ever wrap my brain around it! No matter how times I try to do the classes. Luckily for the most part I can fake it pretty well especially if I’ve got reference.
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