Treehouse feedback
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@Griffin hey Griffin I think this looks great there are just a few things that I would tweak that would help the overall silhouette, but that’s just me. You can take it or leave like I said it looks great already!
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@Griffin This is awesome! It's more of a tree villiage isn't it? I think it's a neat concept, but I'd be a little concerned about all the houses kind of getting lost in the whole thing... maybe that's something that can fixed with values and rendering though
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@Kristen-Lango I don’t mind them looking pretty meshed in with the tree but I think color and value will prevent the buildings from getting lost.
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@Asyas_illos that bit of variation at the top really helps the silhouette, thanks!
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@Griffin I like how you included a power source
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@Griffin yah it’s not much but I think so too, can’t wait to see how it comes along!
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@Griffin
I think this looks awesome! Though I feel it's a little heavy on the left. But the triangle composition is nice! Maybe if you pulled out the round house of the right a tad more, not sure.
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@Heather-Boyd lol, I wrote down this exact note to myself for adjustments to make so I’m glad you’ve confirmed that.
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@Griffin said in Treehouse feedback:
Very cool, looking forward to what you do with color. -
Update: here’s the more or less finished drawing. Just looking for any more feedback before I move onto color.
One concern I have is the building in the center. The perspective looks a bit awkward to me but before it was just a straight on perspective so maybe I’m just not used to it. Let me know what you think
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@Griffin The buildings being in perspective definitely gives the piece more life. I think overall the piece looks great! I cant wait to see it once it's done.
One thing I'm noticing is that the perspective isn't consistent throughout. While I believe it's fine to have certain elements be flat, it looks like those flat elements are a bit random. Maybe you're noticing that and it's throwing off your perception?
