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    • Patricia Dishmon
      Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos The camel is so cute! What's the story?

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

        Big guys done!
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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @Patricia Dishmon last edited by

          @Patricia-Dishmon pretty simple story just elder explorer lady searching for some Egyptian ruins and is almost there when a sandstorm comes through☺️

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          • PenAndrew
            PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by PenAndrew

            @Asyas_illos Does 'Storm' have to just have one character for the contest? Sandstorm is a good take on the prompt. I am thinking storm at sea for mine.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

              @PenAndrew you can as many characters as want I believe. Just good storytelling and concept

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              • PenAndrew
                PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos Yes-that's the harder stuff! Storytelling and Concept.

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                  @PenAndrew I should add though for a dynamic illustration you generally want two to three characters

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                  • PenAndrew
                    PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos Yes I agree and I must learn how to make characters interact. I guess as I work thorough level two of the foundations I will get a better idea.

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                      • Patricia Dishmon
                        Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Can I suggest having her already at a dig site or something and then the sandstorm blows through? I think it'll be clearer that she's there for the ruins if she's already at the ruins. And it'll make it clearer that the storm is inconvenient. Know what I'm saying? Otherwise, she's just kinda walking around in the desert.

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          About to add the “storm” wish me luck!
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                          • Holumpa
                            Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos The sandstorm idea is so good! And your style as always super charming.
                            About adidng the storm, just as an idea, maybe let the camel props be blown, too, the reigns, the saddle cloth ect.

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                            • PenAndrew
                              PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                              @Asyas_illos Great characters.

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by

                                @Holumpa thanks for the feedback! I thought about that, but a lot of the bottom part of the camel I think is going to be obstructed by the storm, which is why didn’t do much in terms of his legs, but I could play with maps more and maybe whisps of camel hair. Thanks again

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                                  @PenAndrew thank you!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Its a crazy feeling to almost completely cover up a picture you just finished, what are your thoughts? Is it too much, did I lose out most of my details?
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                                      I’m thinking of adding a bird of some sort to the upper left corner, a falcon or ibis?

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                                      • Kristen Lango
                                        Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos Wow this is so cool, I can really see and feel that sand blowing. Great job!

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                                          Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                          @Kristen-Lango thank you!

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                                          • Johanna Kim
                                            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos A sandstorm! What a cool idea. Love how this looks. I don't think it's too much. Definitely feels like sand moving swiftly through the air.

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