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    • Patricia Dishmon
      Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos Can I suggest having her already at a dig site or something and then the sandstorm blows through? I think it'll be clearer that she's there for the ruins if she's already at the ruins. And it'll make it clearer that the storm is inconvenient. Know what I'm saying? Otherwise, she's just kinda walking around in the desert.

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        About to add the “storm” wish me luck!
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        • Holumpa
          Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos The sandstorm idea is so good! And your style as always super charming.
          About adidng the storm, just as an idea, maybe let the camel props be blown, too, the reigns, the saddle cloth ect.

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          • PenAndrew
            PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos Great characters.

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by

              @Holumpa thanks for the feedback! I thought about that, but a lot of the bottom part of the camel I think is going to be obstructed by the storm, which is why didn’t do much in terms of his legs, but I could play with maps more and maybe whisps of camel hair. Thanks again

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                @PenAndrew thank you!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Its a crazy feeling to almost completely cover up a picture you just finished, what are your thoughts? Is it too much, did I lose out most of my details?
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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    I’m thinking of adding a bird of some sort to the upper left corner, a falcon or ibis?

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                    • Kristen Lango
                      Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos Wow this is so cool, I can really see and feel that sand blowing. Great job!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                        @Kristen-Lango thank you!

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                        • Johanna Kim
                          Johanna Kim SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos A sandstorm! What a cool idea. Love how this looks. I don't think it's too much. Definitely feels like sand moving swiftly through the air.

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                          • frankiiij
                            frankiiij @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos OHHHHHHH...MYYYYYY...GOODNESS!!!! This looks so authentic! So Gorgeous!

                            Much love and God bless!

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @frankiiij last edited by

                              @frankiiij thank you I appreciate your enthusiasm! 😁

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos @Johanna Kim last edited by

                                @Johanna-Kim thank you!❤️

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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Does the falcon sit well or does he convolute the story? I was just trying to show the difference in the air (in case it wasn’t obvious lol) and the thickness below
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                                  • ArtistErin
                                    ArtistErin @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos This is so adorable

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                                    • PenAndrew
                                      PenAndrew @ArtistErin last edited by

                                      @ArtistErin Yes, I agree.

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos @ArtistErin last edited by

                                        @ArtistErin @PenAndrew thank you ☺️

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                                        • AngelinaKizz
                                          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @Asyas_illos I think because of all the white surrounding the falcon, he's become the focal point.

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                            @AngelinaKizz thanks for the feedback maybe if I darken her hair it’ll bring the attention back down to her…?

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