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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos what if you put a bit more tension on the falcon and flipped him to flying against the wind? You would keep the air change feel, have more of a triangle between your characters (minus the pharaoh).

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        So the falcon is definitely not needed to tell the story I was just thinking it was lacking something I tried one more spot for him but I can remove him altogether if it doesn’t work what do you guys think?
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        • PenAndrew
          PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I think if you wanted to keep the falcon which I prefer on the left, but I agree it does draw your eye, as it well done, maybe you could make it a lower value, almost a silhouette and lower it in the sky.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

            I think the falcon is causing too much trouble LOL so out he goes

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              PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos The wonderful thing about digital falcons is that they last forever and can return another day! This is one of the values and wonders of Procreate.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                @PenAndrew yes he will be back sometime!

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                • PenAndrew
                  PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos Did you see Rabbit road race is the july prompt!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @PenAndrew last edited by

                    @PenAndrew haha no I’ll check it out!

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Started a new sketch for storm any thoughts on concept or composition? Story is pretty simple just a pilot racing the storm and loving it!
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                        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Think I’m going anthropomorphic with this one open to animal suggestions!

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                            PenAndrew @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos The Falcon!

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                              I’m thinking bear, maybe panda?
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                                Mike Marttila @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos I think a panda would be a winner! The only caveat there would be to make sure that the black patches of fur don't get lost in the dark storm clouds. Looking forward to seeing how this one shapes up.

                                P.S. Great work with the desert piece! I think you really nailed the sandstorm.

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                                  Asyas_illos @Mike Marttila last edited by

                                  @Mike-Marttila thank you and yes since I darkened the sky even more not sure how it’d work out.

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    So sketched out some more characters what do you guys think Im stuck between two…
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                                    • AngelinaKizz
                                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      @Asyas_illos I think the elephant is a good one, because you can lean his Grey into a blue and complement the orange while having enough contrast to the charcoal clouds. You could also push the size to make it funnier.

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                                        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                        @AngelinaKizz yes I would definitely increase his size for sure!

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                                        • KevinTreaccar
                                          KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by KevinTreaccar

                                          @Asyas_illos I also vote for the elephant.

                                          A) Thanks to its weight, it’s the funniest in a plane.
                                          B )I think the giraffe would need to be in a more uniquely shaped craft to fit right.

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                            Well I did one one with a person just to see and I like it too…
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