Failed Treehouse Critique Please!
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@LauraA Thank you Laura — actually I would be very content if it just read as "magical factory". What a cool concept Thanks for all the feedback — I'm looking forward to getting a chance to apply it all!
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@Katherine No worries, it looks fine on your website!
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@Robert-Henderson Wow Robert, I don't mind at all — that was really very sweet and heartwarming to read. Thank you. I think that might be one of the nicest things anyone has every said to me
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Hi again everybody, I've begun reconstructing my Treehouse illustration! I'm starting with the composition and silhouette of the treehouse and this is where I'm at so far:
If anyone has feedback on the changes I've made to the composition and silhouette that would be absolutely fantastic!
Rendering, values, and concept will be addressed at a later date!
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@Katherine How did you do in the competition- your image was fabulous.
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@PenAndrew Oh thanks Stephen ( I have learnt your name is not Andrew since our last exchange!). Alas I was eliminated in the first round but I lost to one of the winners so that eases the sting. hehe
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@Katherine You should be so happy your illustration is so beautiful and meaningful- I absolutely love it. Love your style. Glad you had some more recognition for your talent. I still don't know who won apart from Kim.
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@PenAndrew Gosh thank you so much Stephen! I was very surprised I was in the top 16, so that was nice. I am very happy with aspects of it. I'm going to spend a few more days on some of the things I didn't get around to and some of the things I'm not happy with before I upload it to my portfolio though. I have a bit of a backlog of older work I need to finish first though!
Yeah I lost to Kim The other winner was Kate Presley — super strong piece. I'm really glad she won, much deserved.
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@Katherine Oh great I predicted Kim and Kate as two of the top 4, glad to know my instincts were correct.
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@Katherine You should be very happy.