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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Still chipping at this one
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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

        Think I’m done with this one😊
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        • MelissaJacie
          MelissaJacie @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I like this background tree branch! Nice work there! Inspiring.

          Melissa Jacie Art
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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @MelissaJacie last edited by

            @MelissaJacie thank you!

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Starting a spread for Hansel and Gretel
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                • Asyas_illos
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                  Just got some heads to do lol
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                  • Asyas_illos
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                    Wrapped this up today!
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                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos This is looking great! ❤

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                        Asyas_illos @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                        @Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks 😊

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                            • Asyas_illos
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                              So i did away with the carousel and went with this instead. I need to do more spot illustrations I realized, for my portfolio… so here we are… again… lol
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                  Ok finished with this one do You think it’s portfolio material?
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                                    • Asyas_illos
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                                      I was doing this piece for my portfolio but I read up on the upcoming critique arenas and thought I could amend my original concept a tiny bit to fit the prompt cloud. Does anything stand out as far as composition or story, etc.? I plan to add rain in the last steps.
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                                        Kim Rosenlof @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos I like the simplified buildings in the background. The main thing is that I am not sure of the concept. Why is there a cloud? Does he have a cloud/rain over him because of the ice cream? Was he angry but becoming happy because of the ice cream? If so, to me it doesn't read that way yet. I also see that you wrote rainbow off to the side, what story are you trying to tell with that?

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                                          Asyas_illos @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                          @Kim-Rosenlof so my concept is that instead of a grumpy rain cloud it’s going to be a bright cloud with a rainbow shining upon him, the rain I mentioned earlier will be be everywhere except his happy little bubble, does that work? there will be color only in that area.

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                                          • Asyas_illos
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                                            So I’m revisiting some older illustrations and giving them a makeover, lol, first up is this “down the rabbit hole”. I really like it already but there are a few things that can be fixed and updated.
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