My Cloud WIP
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@KevinTreaccar Thank Kevin! Great feedback! I may use the feather idea...hmmm.
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@Tom-Shannon Exciting line work and concept. Lots of energy. I really like the cloud's expression. I see the big cloud blowing a gust of wind to propel the raindrops down to earth. The raindrops at present both have almost identical expressions. Perhaps you might vary their gazes and expressions to distinguish them a bit?
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@Tom-Shannon this is brilliant. I don't think the concept is boring at all... I would like to see the poses of the rain droplets being pushed more to the extreme though, like those surfer or skateboarder pose on billboard ads
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@ArtMelC I agree with your feedback. I thought of this very idea after posting my comp. More expression for sure!! Thank you!
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@Johanna-Kim Thank you for the kind words Johanna! I'm with you, the rain drops are too static and boring. I'll rework it and post an update soon.
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@Tom-Shannon Very cool work, Tom. Definitely a good concept too. Just as an idea, maybe try having the droplets riding sailboards. Just thinking that windsurfing may fit better.
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@Erichousel oh man, that is a good idea! Thank you for the feedback!!
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@Tom-Shannon I've made a few updates. Thank you @Erichousel for the wind surfing idea. Thank you @ArtMelC, @Johanna-Kim, and @KevinTreaccar for your feedback!! Latest update.
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@Tom-Shannon Much better with the wind surfing! Awesome!
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@Tom-Shannon super cool!
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@ArtMelC Thank you again for your feedback!
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@Jeremiahbrown Thank you!!
