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    • ArtMelC
      ArtMelC @Guest last edited by

      @Tom-Shannon this is brilliant. I don't think the concept is boring at all... I would like to see the poses of the rain droplets being pushed more to the extreme though, like those surfer or skateboarder pose on billboard ads

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        A Former User @ArtMelC last edited by

        @ArtMelC I agree with your feedback. I thought of this very idea after posting my comp. More expression for sure!! Thank you!

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          A Former User @Johanna Kim last edited by

          @Johanna-Kim Thank you for the kind words Johanna! I'm with you, the rain drops are too static and boring. I'll rework it and post an update soon.

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          • Erichousel
            Erichousel @Guest last edited by

            @Tom-Shannon Very cool work, Tom. Definitely a good concept too. Just as an idea, maybe try having the droplets riding sailboards. Just thinking that windsurfing may fit better.

            Eric Housel

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              A Former User @Erichousel last edited by

              @Erichousel oh man, that is a good idea! Thank you for the feedback!!

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                A Former User @Guest last edited by

                @Tom-Shannon I've made a few updates. Thank you @Erichousel for the wind surfing idea. Thank you @ArtMelC, @Johanna-Kim, and @KevinTreaccar for your feedback!! Latest update.

                TomShannonIllustration.jpg

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                • Jeremiahbrown
                  Jeremiahbrown @Guest last edited by

                  @Tom-Shannon Much better with the wind surfing! Awesome!

                  Jeremiah Brown
                  www.jeremiahbrownillustration.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremiah.brownillustration/

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                  • ArtMelC
                    ArtMelC @Guest last edited by

                    @Tom-Shannon super cool!

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                      A Former User @ArtMelC last edited by

                      @ArtMelC Thank you again for your feedback!

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                        A Former User @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                        @Jeremiahbrown Thank you!!

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