Glowing wips:)

[Asyas_illos]

Forward progress

[A Former User]

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[Asyas_illos]

I think I’m done with the kids now on to the ghost! I’m still open to feedback, but I don’t think I’ll be making any big changes at this point

[Asyas_illos]

A little bit more to go…

[Kim Rosenlof]

@Asyas_illos Ooo...I like how it turned out! Nice glow effect.

[Asyas_illos]

@Kim-Rosenlof thanks! I really am enjoying this one!

[Asyas_illos]

Does his expression look like he doesn’t know he’s the scary thing and is looking behind him like there’s something else to be scared of? Lol that was exhausting just writing it

[Asyas_illos]

Still not sure if the story is coming through… also do you think the background props are too distracting?

[ArtistErin]

@Asyas_illos I think the props help anchor the scene, which helps show he's a ghost and it makes sense... maybe you could have the ghost crouched, like he could be holding the shoulders of the last person in the line, as he's looking behind him to add to the idea he has no idea he's the scary thing in the room. Ha ha ha I love this idea! Sorta reminds me of the movie The Others.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Asyas_illos the props help me too see him as a ghost. At first without the props I though it looks like dad that is somehow lit differently, even though I know it should be a ghost. i love how he also seems to be peaking around for scary stuff. Somehow his face makes me think of him more of being their dad instead of a ghost. But now im also wondering how a ghost would look like

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Asyas_illos I'm sure you're going to have great chances again at winning! It does look great.

[AngelinaKizz]

@Asyas_illos this one is my favourite so far! Great job

[Asyas_illos]

@ArtistErin thanks for the feedback , I love that movie!

[Asyas_illos]

@Chantal-Goetheer thank you!

[Asyas_illos]

@AngelinaKizz thank you!