Hey everyone!
Just need some feedback on this WIP. There’s a few specific issues I have in mind but they’re the sorts of things you might not notice unless a bring I mention it so it might be better to look at the illustration first, see what issues stand out and then read what I have below.
So my brother said he thinks the characters on the left and right look sort of disconnected from the scene, like they’re not engaged in what’s going on because they’re focused on something off screen. Do any of you feel the same? I intentionally made them focused on something we can’t see because it gives a sense of more going on outside the frame which I really like.
I’m also wondering if the skeleton and gremlin climbing up the platform are too hard to see, I don’t want them to be a huge focal point but I also don’t want them to disappear.
There’s plenty of other things that are off right now, like the text not being very readable. Don’t worry about that stuff. I just want to make sure I get any larger issues out of the way like posing characters differently and what not.
Thanks!