Making my first Portfolio

[carlianne]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to stay they were ugly!!! Just not traditionally appealing, which could work fine if in your story you want to be highlighting that it's actually super creepy that these kids straight up murder a witch. It just depends on what your story is and what you're trying to communicate.

That said i do think these look better but the boy does still look a bit old to me (late teens early 20s). Might be worth showing it around and having people guess the age.

[Griffin McPherson]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon the stepmother looks fine, it was the ole woman/witch I was talking about with the silhouette

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

@carlianne that's a good idea, I will ask some friends to guess his age.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Hi! This is just my opinion so feel free to disregard but I think it's more important to see narrative illustrations than character designs in a CB portfolio. Don't get too caught up in character designs, instead do more narrative illustrations.

[Maureen*Henry*Artist]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I’m going to step up and offer a different opinion than the others. My very first impression when I saw your characters, and I still feel this way even after reading the other comments, is that your characters are unique (from each other, meaning they don’t look like they came from the same mold as each other) and appealing (appealing doesn’t always mean cute) and I feel you nailed the look for a modern approach to the Hansel and Gretel story. I think you did a great job in conveying personality in your original designs just as they are even with the snot under Gretel’s nose . To me, that little detail adds to her character which I think you may have intended. The bunny adds to her innocence and youth, but the pigtails, freckles, and snot add that she could be a little sassy and bratty (and/or entitled) which in todays world, a lot of kids can relate to. Hansel looks to be more of a teen with his hoodie and unlaced high top sneakers. Keep the earphones and you nailed the boy teen with some attitude. I think the old lady witch looks cool and creepy with her large glasses and eyes, kinda like a mix between a Harry Potter and motorcycle grandma character. She is frumpy and low to the ground at kid-level height, all at once trying to relate to them but be devious and creepy. If this is what you intended, then I think you nailed it. But if I’m off, then maybe I gave you some ideas, lol. To me, the current trend of the way “cute” is drawn above is cookie cutter in my opinion. It is nice to see characters that don’t all look the same as each other which in of itself is appealing to me. Different shapes for different characters give off different personalities. Your lines are strong and confident which further adds to the appealing nature of your character designs.

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

@Maureen-Henry-Artist Thank you, your interpration is indeed what I wanted to communicate! it feels great that you described them as I see them.

This being said @carlianne was right. I showed around Hansel without his family and people's guess is between 13 and 40 years old! Something in the face, they say. He looks like a teenager but his face is that of an aldult. However, when he is showed with the rest of the line-up, they see him as 10-15 years old. Interesting... Not sure what to do though

Anyway. Here are the pages, I have worked on. So that the portfolio starts to get some narrative illustrations as suggested by @Nyrryl-Cadiz.

Portfolio piece 4/15 (Page 1 and 2)

Portfolio piece 5/15 (Page 3 and 4)

I struggled with the color of page 3, and I am not sure yet if I will keep it like that or adjust the green a little.

I was going to make a facial expression sheet of Hansel next, but I think I should focus on narrative illustrations now. Maybe something else than Hansel and Gretel. We will see

[kirsten-mcg]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I really like your spread of the cabin, dad, and kids on the top. Is the evil step mom controlling dad? I love the visual you've used to show her controlling power. The color on page 3 is tricky. Have you tried lightening up the background behind the step mom a little more, so that she's even more of a silhouette? Right now I feel like she's blending into the doorway a little more than she should.

[ArtMelC]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon your Hansel doesn't look that old here, maybe because his eyes enlarged significantly so he looks more goofy/younger. I think you can do away with the character turnarounds and just show these pages.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Hi! I don't have a lot of time to explain this but here is what I think you can work on more with this piece. I think you need the Stepmother to pop out more and I think you should also change the pose of the Dad as he yanks Hansel. Overall, I think everything is looking great. I hope this was helpful

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

Thank you for the feedback! Yes I will definitely make the door frame lighter, and make the stepmother silhouette pop out. I had difficulties to change the mask opacity in the software I’ve used.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Your characters are great. I like the colors and silhouettes. I do agree with @Nyrryl-Cadiz with the changes she made on page 3 and 4. The composition feels better and it is easier to see the stepmother now. I do like the modern twist on the Hansel and Gretel story. Can't wait to see how this progresses.

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

Here is an update of the page 3 where I tried to make the silouhette stand out and get rid of the noise.

I will call it done for now as I spent way too much time on the color of this piece!

Meanwhile I started to work on a new piece that is the Candy House scene. It’s 90% complete but I hesitate between going for a pinkish background or a blue background.
I like the pink because it makes the trees look like candy clouds, but I like the blue as well because it implicitly hints to a dark turn in the story.

Which one do you prefer?

Edit: how do I resize a picture so that it only takes 50% of the available width?

[ajillustrates]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Why not both? You can have a layer that’s the pink overlay, mask it to just show the house/trees/etc, and then you can control how strong the pink is relative to the dark background with the opacity or blending modes.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon I love your candy house! I'm trying to create a candy world but struggle a lot and yours seems so fun, effortless and simply awesome.
Colour wise my first instinct is the darker one but I would also turn it to gray scale to check how the character and house stand out best in terms of contrasting values.

[Griffin McPherson]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon these look great! The start to a strong portfolio I think

[AnumC]

These look great! I love the illustration of the candy house. Amazing work!

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

@Chantal-Goetheer it is definitely not effortless haha! But they says it becomes easier and easier with time, right

I do check the grayscale regularly, I set up my iPad so that 3 click on the power button make the screen in grayscale. Super handy!

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

Thank you for all your feedback!

As usual, I could not wait to start a new piece, so I let the question of pink or blue for the candy house for later. But it seems that many people like the blue one.

So here is my current piece. After the feedback on Hansel, I wanted to make a kid with a head shape and proportion that is more standard in the industry. I also tried to go toward a more painting style using Aveline Stokart as an inspiration (she speak about her method in 21Draw). It was fun but there is so much to explore!

Without background:

With a simple background:

What do you think of the general illustration? Should I have a few illustrations in that style in my portfolio next to my usual line art/comics style which I used for Hansel and Gretel? Do you think the version with the background is good enough? I like the way the light pops up on the version without background, but I also like how the background create a sense of space.

[ArtistErin]

@Geoffrey-Mégardon Love this I love the silhouette of the candy house, so much fun.. If you make any changes on this, I would lighten the value of the dark blue background so the house pops more?

[Geoffrey Mégardon]

I am working on the composition of my next portfolio piece, featuring one of my original character, John Space.

What do you think in terms of the narrative and the composition? Is it clear what is happening? Would kids like this? Is the composition working?

I also tried with only one creature here.

I initially thought of a swarm of scary black rabbits, but I thought it was too scary, too reminiscent of Rayman Legends and also the angle did not allow to really show their faces. But I don’t know, I am still hesitating!

I believe that this kind of space ranger adventure won’t necessarily be for younger kids. But seeing Disney releasing Light Year and Strange World makes me think that there might be a market for space rangers and exploring strange worlds haha!