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    Tight Deadline! New Book Project. Feedback Much Appreciated!

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    • ArtistErin
      ArtistErin @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      @Elizabeth-Rose You know what's cool since we're talking about our names, my middle name is Elizabeth! My grandparents would say in such a beautiful way, "Erin Elizabeth!!" and smile, I loved my middle name the most because of that. 🙂 ❤

      Erin Richardson
      instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
      www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose @ArtistErin last edited by

        @ArtistErin Oh! That’s so cool! There is something so special about how loved one’s say ones names. 🙂 Such a happy memory

        https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
        https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
        https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          I’ll be working on these three spreads this month.

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          https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
          https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            So far I got four hours in this one. I’m getting really excited about it!

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            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              It’s coming along!
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              https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
              https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
              https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                GabeRobinson @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                @Elizabeth-Rose Wow! this is looking beautiful!

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @GabeRobinson last edited by

                  @GabeRobinson Thanks!

                  https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    I must say this new picturebook project is probably going to be my favorite book project to date.
                    Finished another scene last week 🙂

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                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                    • kirsten-mcg
                      kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      @Elizabeth-Rose this is just gorgeous! I love the design and the color palette you're using. And I’m really enjoying scrolling through and seeing the images shape up. Your work is very inspiring. 🙂

                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                      Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                      • MiaNova
                        MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @Elizabeth-Rose How pretty! You have a really good light source but If you want you could add just a tiny bit of rim lighting on some of the characters and flowers to make them pop out more. But it still looks good the way it is 😃

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                          @kirsten-mcg Awe, Thanks! Its quite exciting I must say!

                          @MiaNova Thanks! And yes, that is a good point, I played around with some rim lighting! Goodness, it can be a bit tricky sometimes.

                          https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                          https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                          https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                          • Elizabeth Rose
                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            Goodness, I’ve not posted in a while. Here is an update:
                            The Cover Reveal was this week!
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                            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                            • ksfabian
                              ksfabian @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                              @Elizabeth-Rose It looks amazing! Great work!!

                              ksfabiancreations.com

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                              • ArtMelC
                                ArtMelC @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                @Elizabeth-Rose looks wonderful. Did you engage a designer or design the whole book yourself?

                                www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                                www.artmelc.com
                                I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                                • kirsten-mcg
                                  kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                  @Elizabeth-Rose I know i keep saying this, but I'm just in love with your color palette for this book! Beautiful.

                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                                  Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                                  • Chantal Goetheer
                                    Chantal Goetheer @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                    @Elizabeth-Rose love the colours!! It looks like such a cozy and warm story.

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                                    • Elizabeth Rose
                                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                      @ksfabian Thank You! The cover was fun to make!

                                      @ArtMelC Thanks, and good question, I’m actually a graphic designer by day, and a illustrator by night. So yeah, I do the design myself.

                                      @kirsten-mcg Awe! Thanks! It’s been a fun color palette to use! I get some of my color choices from the Adobe Color website. Lots of fun combos there in the Explore Tab.

                                      @Chantal-Goetheer Awe! Yes, I feel like its turning into one I want to hope into.

                                      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                      • Elizabeth Rose
                                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                        I’ve had this one finished for a while, just now posting it.
                                        Most of the story is still in rough sketch & chicken scratches. I’m trying really hard to clean it up and get it to my beta readers by the end of this week. I’m actually a whole week behind on that. Oops!
                                        And I just announced the Pre-order date for the first day of Spring! March 20th! I think its quite suiting 🙂

                                        @MiaNova Check out the rim lighting in this one

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                                        https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                        https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                        https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                        • MiaNova
                                          MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                          @Elizabeth-Rose oh WOW this is so pretty! The rim lighting adds a nice touch it’s really good! I love it 😃

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                                          • Elizabeth Rose
                                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                            And More rim lighting!
                                            I’m still chugging away on the illustrations!

                                            And. . . Finally got my edits and suggestions back from my Beta Readers. So many good suggestions! Hiring others to edit and give suggestions for a book in progress is sooooo worth it!

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                                            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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