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    Tight Deadline! New Book Project. Feedback Much Appreciated!

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      So far I got four hours in this one. Iโ€™m getting really excited about it!

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      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        Itโ€™s coming along!
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        https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
        https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
        https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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          GabeRobinson @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          @Elizabeth-Rose Wow! this is looking beautiful!

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose @GabeRobinson last edited by

            @GabeRobinson Thanks!

            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              I must say this new picturebook project is probably going to be my favorite book project to date.
              Finished another scene last week ๐Ÿ™‚

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              https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
              https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
              https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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              • kirsten-mcg
                kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                @Elizabeth-Rose this is just gorgeous! I love the design and the color palette you're using. And Iโ€™m really enjoying scrolling through and seeing the images shape up. Your work is very inspiring. ๐Ÿ™‚

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                • MiaNova
                  MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  @Elizabeth-Rose How pretty! You have a really good light source but If you want you could add just a tiny bit of rim lighting on some of the characters and flowers to make them pop out more. But it still looks good the way it is ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                    @kirsten-mcg Awe, Thanks! Its quite exciting I must say!

                    @MiaNova Thanks! And yes, that is a good point, I played around with some rim lighting! Goodness, it can be a bit tricky sometimes.

                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      Goodness, Iโ€™ve not posted in a while. Here is an update:
                      The Cover Reveal was this week!
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                      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                      • ksfabian
                        ksfabian @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @Elizabeth-Rose It looks amazing! Great work!!

                        ksfabiancreations.com

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                        • ArtMelC
                          ArtMelC @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                          @Elizabeth-Rose looks wonderful. Did you engage a designer or design the whole book yourself?

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                          • kirsten-mcg
                            kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            @Elizabeth-Rose I know i keep saying this, but I'm just in love with your color palette for this book! Beautiful.

                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                            Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                            • Chantal Goetheer
                              Chantal Goetheer @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                              @Elizabeth-Rose love the colours!! It looks like such a cozy and warm story.

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                              • Elizabeth Rose
                                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                @ksfabian Thank You! The cover was fun to make!

                                @ArtMelC Thanks, and good question, Iโ€™m actually a graphic designer by day, and a illustrator by night. So yeah, I do the design myself.

                                @kirsten-mcg Awe! Thanks! Itโ€™s been a fun color palette to use! I get some of my color choices from the Adobe Color website. Lots of fun combos there in the Explore Tab.

                                @Chantal-Goetheer Awe! Yes, I feel like its turning into one I want to hope into.

                                https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                • Elizabeth Rose
                                  Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                  Iโ€™ve had this one finished for a while, just now posting it.
                                  Most of the story is still in rough sketch & chicken scratches. Iโ€™m trying really hard to clean it up and get it to my beta readers by the end of this week. Iโ€™m actually a whole week behind on that. Oops!
                                  And I just announced the Pre-order date for the first day of Spring! March 20th! I think its quite suiting ๐Ÿ™‚

                                  @MiaNova Check out the rim lighting in this one

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                                  https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                  • MiaNova
                                    MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                    @Elizabeth-Rose oh WOW this is so pretty! The rim lighting adds a nice touch itโ€™s really good! I love it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                                    • Elizabeth Rose
                                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                      And More rim lighting!
                                      Iโ€™m still chugging away on the illustrations!

                                      And. . . Finally got my edits and suggestions back from my Beta Readers. So many good suggestions! Hiring others to edit and give suggestions for a book in progress is sooooo worth it!

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                                      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                      • jenn
                                        jenn @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                                        @Pamela-Fraley Me too

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                                        • agathe
                                          agathe @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                          @Elizabeth-Rose I have just found this thread and I have to say I am absolutely in awe! It is so cool to see the project evolve from it's very first edition to this finalized form! Thank you for sharing!

                                          website: https://www.agathedenis.com/
                                          instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dessin.agathe/

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                                          • AjugaBee
                                            AjugaBee last edited by

                                            This has been amazing to see! So darn inspiring๐Ÿ˜† I love your colors and the whimsical vibes ๐Ÿ˜Š โœจ

                                            analiseblack.com

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