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    Tight Deadline! New Book Project. Feedback Much Appreciated!

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      It’s coming along!
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      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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        GabeRobinson @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        @Elizabeth-Rose Wow! this is looking beautiful!

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose @GabeRobinson last edited by

          @GabeRobinson Thanks!

          https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
          https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            I must say this new picturebook project is probably going to be my favorite book project to date.
            Finished another scene last week 🙂

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            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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            • kirsten-mcg
              kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

              @Elizabeth-Rose this is just gorgeous! I love the design and the color palette you're using. And I’m really enjoying scrolling through and seeing the images shape up. Your work is very inspiring. 🙂

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
              Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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              • MiaNova
                MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                @Elizabeth-Rose How pretty! You have a really good light source but If you want you could add just a tiny bit of rim lighting on some of the characters and flowers to make them pop out more. But it still looks good the way it is 😃

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                  @kirsten-mcg Awe, Thanks! Its quite exciting I must say!

                  @MiaNova Thanks! And yes, that is a good point, I played around with some rim lighting! Goodness, it can be a bit tricky sometimes.

                  https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    Goodness, I’ve not posted in a while. Here is an update:
                    The Cover Reveal was this week!
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                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                    • ksfabian
                      ksfabian @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      @Elizabeth-Rose It looks amazing! Great work!!

                      ksfabiancreations.com

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                      • ArtMelC
                        ArtMelC @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        @Elizabeth-Rose looks wonderful. Did you engage a designer or design the whole book yourself?

                        www.instagram.com/art.melc.illo/
                        www.artmelc.com
                        I write weekly on mondayblues.substack.com

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                        • kirsten-mcg
                          kirsten-mcg @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                          @Elizabeth-Rose I know i keep saying this, but I'm just in love with your color palette for this book! Beautiful.

                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
                          Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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                          • Chantal Goetheer
                            Chantal Goetheer @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            @Elizabeth-Rose love the colours!! It looks like such a cozy and warm story.

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                            • Elizabeth Rose
                              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                              @ksfabian Thank You! The cover was fun to make!

                              @ArtMelC Thanks, and good question, I’m actually a graphic designer by day, and a illustrator by night. So yeah, I do the design myself.

                              @kirsten-mcg Awe! Thanks! It’s been a fun color palette to use! I get some of my color choices from the Adobe Color website. Lots of fun combos there in the Explore Tab.

                              @Chantal-Goetheer Awe! Yes, I feel like its turning into one I want to hope into.

                              https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                              https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                              https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                              • Elizabeth Rose
                                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                I’ve had this one finished for a while, just now posting it.
                                Most of the story is still in rough sketch & chicken scratches. I’m trying really hard to clean it up and get it to my beta readers by the end of this week. I’m actually a whole week behind on that. Oops!
                                And I just announced the Pre-order date for the first day of Spring! March 20th! I think its quite suiting 🙂

                                @MiaNova Check out the rim lighting in this one

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                                https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                • MiaNova
                                  MiaNova @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                  @Elizabeth-Rose oh WOW this is so pretty! The rim lighting adds a nice touch it’s really good! I love it 😃

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                                  • Elizabeth Rose
                                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                    And More rim lighting!
                                    I’m still chugging away on the illustrations!

                                    And. . . Finally got my edits and suggestions back from my Beta Readers. So many good suggestions! Hiring others to edit and give suggestions for a book in progress is sooooo worth it!

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                                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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                                      jenn @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                                      @Pamela-Fraley Me too

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                                      • agathe
                                        agathe @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                        @Elizabeth-Rose I have just found this thread and I have to say I am absolutely in awe! It is so cool to see the project evolve from it's very first edition to this finalized form! Thank you for sharing!

                                        website: https://www.agathedenis.com/
                                        instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dessin.agathe/

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                                        • AjugaBee
                                          AjugaBee last edited by

                                          This has been amazing to see! So darn inspiring😆 I love your colors and the whimsical vibes 😊 ✨

                                          analiseblack.com

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                                          • Elizabeth Rose
                                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                            @agathe Awe! Thanks Agatha! That’s so encouraging to hear! I’ll keep on sharing this project!

                                            @AjugaBee Yey! Thanks for sharing that! And in turn, you all on here are one of the reasons I’ve kept chugging along on this project 🙂

                                            Also, finished the rendering on another spread:
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                                            The before:
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                                            A lot of the spreads are not colored yet. Most are in various stages of the final drawing render. And as of today, I’m sitting on three weeks to go before I need to submit the final for print. Looks like I’m still managing to cut it close!
                                            My goal is to illustrate 3 hours a day, for five days a week until then. Fingers crossed!

                                            Comments wanted (and please, suggestions, thoughts and comments are always welcome).

                                            https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                                            https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                                            https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

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