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    • Mimi Simon
      Mimi Simon @LauraA last edited by

      @LauraA, your illustrations are beautiful, I love the soft colours and line work. However I do have one critique since you said you were open to it. While your backgrounds and characters for the most part are drawn in a naturalistic style (perspective, forms turning in space, drapery etc) the characters' expressions are drawn in a super stylized cartoon/comic strip style (short hand 2d mouth shapes, eyebrow shapes, some extreme squash and stretch) to me, this doesn't fit with the style of the rest of the illustrations. Is this an intentional choice for how you want your style to look or is it because you struggle with more naturalistic expressions?

      http://mimisimon.com/
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      • Blitz55
        Blitz55 @LauraA last edited by

        @LauraA Those are beautiful, well done. Will be checking out your Instagram. πŸ˜ƒ

        Draw, Draw, Draw, Draw and Draw Some More!
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/levisimpson55/

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        • Blitz55
          Blitz55 last edited by

          Here is another tree troll I did as I continue to work these creatures out in my head and figure out what part I'd like them to play in a story of some kind. I do know there will be all types of these Tree Trolls, some quite small, some as large as a massive bear and some much, much, MUCH larger than that. Something I quite enjoy about trolls is the variety in which you can design with them. πŸ™‚

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          Draw, Draw, Draw, Draw and Draw Some More!
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/levisimpson55/

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          • LauraA
            LauraA SVS OG @Mimi Simon last edited by

            @Mimi-Simon It's definitely a stylistic thing. All the characters started out more naturalistic and evolved over time. I just liked exaggerating them a bit to make them more expressive. This may be the way my whole style is going, but I can't quite tell yet. Do you think they are incompatible?

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
            http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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            • Mimi Simon
              Mimi Simon @LauraA last edited by

              @LauraA I think exaggerating is totally an important thing in all illustration. I may have worded my critique wrong to make it sound like that was bad. Its more like, to me I see two radically different styles in your illustrations between the expressions and everything else. I think the way the expressions are drawn are so different that it comes off more like you didn't put care into the expressions as apposed to the expressions are exaggerated. I think the problem is more that the features are drawn in a 2d shorthand way (similar to what you often see in manga) rather than that they are too exaggerated. If you take a look at for example expression sheets from tangled the disney movie they are super exaggerated but they use real perspective and the features move in a naturalistic way as apposed to turning into abstract 2d shapes. I think something along those lines would work really well for your style thats already super naturalistic and beautiful. your work also reminds me a bit of trina schart hyman so you could take a look at how she draws faces and expressions as well.

              http://mimisimon.com/
              https://www.instagram.com/mimisimonart/
              https://bsky.app/profile/mimisimon.bsky.social

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                My version of an Instagram dtiys post by @MarcRobinson his is awesome go check it out!
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                • LauraA
                  LauraA SVS OG @Mimi Simon last edited by

                  @Mimi-Simon Oh, Trina Schart Hymann is my idol!!! I used to draw faces like hers in high school, and in fact, I used to be an oil portraitist. But an oil portraitist does not an illustrator make, everyone kept telling me my style was nostalgic, and I perceived this to mean my style was out of date.

                  Thus this is sort of an experimental period in which I am trying to figure out how to work faster, concentrate more on story, and update my style, which in turn may lead to consistency problems. I'll take this feedback into consideration as I keep working it out. Thank you!

                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                  http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                  • Mimi Simon
                    Mimi Simon @LauraA last edited by

                    @LauraA this make a lot of sense. Inconstancy in style means you are growing and learning new things. I'm definitely looking forward to where your'e headed.

                    http://mimisimon.com/
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                    • Tom Harshberger
                      Tom Harshberger @Blitz55 last edited by

                      @Blitz55 Dude your style is great. I love it.

                      instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                      • Blitz55
                        Blitz55 @Tom Harshberger last edited by

                        @Tom-Harshberger Thanks man, I really appreciate that. πŸ™‚

                        Draw, Draw, Draw, Draw and Draw Some More!
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/levisimpson55/

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                        • Sarah VanDam
                          Sarah VanDam @LauraA last edited by

                          @LauraA I love this!!! They have a slight Arthur Rackham vibe, which I really like.

                          I might agree with @Mimi-Simon on just two expressions: the one where Hansel turns to Gretel outside the candy house and MAYBE the witch’s expression when she is swooping in. Since they’re larger, or more close-up, I think I expect to see just a touch more detail as compared to the faces that are further away or smaller. For the witch specifically, maybe I’d expect to see more delicate linework or wrinkles, but honestly, it’s just the one expression of Hansel that I might hone a little more. It looks a little more 2-d compared to the others. I think all the other expressions and gestures work really well.

                          https://sarahvandam.art/
                          Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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                            GabeRobinson @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                            @Melissa_Bailey oooh! I love this!

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Interior art on Hamsters begins πŸ˜ƒ

                              That's a high-quality raven, methinks. Very foreboding.

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                              • AngelinaKizz
                                AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                I’ve been going hard with university this semester, so I haven’t completed any personal artworks, but I really like how this assignment turned out. It was a self portrait assignment that we were supposed to show who we are and not just what we look like. 4FCE727F-64D2-4040-B451-3DFA32B740F7.jpeg

                                www.evarartistry.com
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                  @AngelinaKizz wow so cool! It says a lot, nice work😊

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                                  • Melissa_Bailey
                                    Melissa_Bailey @GabeRobinson last edited by

                                    @GabeRobinson thank you!

                                    illustrator - author - smiley person
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                                    • Miriam
                                      Miriam @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                                      @Melissa_Bailey Wow! This is wonderful! Everything about it is beautiful.

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                                      • Kristen Lango
                                        Kristen Lango @Tom Harshberger last edited by

                                        @Tom-Harshberger This is really lovely! Great job!

                                        https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                        • Kristen Lango
                                          Kristen Lango @LauraA last edited by

                                          @LauraA Wow Laura, you did an amazing job on these! I definitely think your year of focus really paid off! I can't see any art director not being impressed by your storytelling abilities πŸ™‚

                                          https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                          https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                          • Kristen Lango
                                            Kristen Lango last edited by

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                                            Hey guys! I can't believe its the middle of March already. I'm busy at work making my way through CBP, this is Red's mom and Red in front of the "Wolf" who is a rattle snake in my take on the tale πŸ™‚

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