NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Miriam thanks!he was fun to come up with!

[mcoxart]

I illustrated a (self-published) kid's book a couple of years ago, here's one illustration which I consider to be among the weakest.

Background: The characters put on a "Wizard of Oz" school play. Off-stage, a character with magical powers creates a real-life tornado to make the play more exciting, which takes everyone by surprise. This illustration is meant to convey the fever-pitch of chaos that occurs in the auditorium, as the tornado snatches up objects from the audience -- grandma's dentures, the Principal's toupee, the Superintendent's pink purse, etc. I will say the illustration demanded a level of technical skill that was beyond me at the time, and I'd be grateful to anyone willing to "rip it apart" so I can do this better next time!

the illustration that made it into the book (yikes):

another composition attempt:

[Amy sa]

(Middle class girl in fancy mall, She's at the eating portion with lots of decoration, She was surprised to see cristmas tree in summer so she decided to take a selfie)

Made the character with colors, but for the background i wanted to do grayscale version first and then color. The background is not looking as I thought.
I'm a very begginner to this, and it's my first illustration for childrens book but I do know how to use photoshop and have some drawung skills. it'ld be really helpful if you make an critic on this.
~Amy

[Amy sa]

[Amy sa]

Adjusted it a bit, played with light and shadows also recolored it, It's much better now, but I still want crits on this for further improvement,
Also need advise for beginners I can make a full page like this but many books include creative graphic design which I've no experience on.

[stephanie]

Here! I'll add this to the pile. Hope it comes in handy! Loving HTFYA. Hoping you keep up that monthly draw-overs & drawing crits, as an ongoing promotion of SVSlearn and the How To Fix Your Art booklet, once it's done.

[Anika Tasnim]

Would love to be considered for critiques. Thanks in advance!

[tamatea16.art]

@Lee-White

[kayleenartlover]

[Miriam]

@mcoxart I remember watching an SVS critique on a tornado illustration where it was pointed out that the objects in the tornado were still right-side up, instead of oriented in all directions.

[Miriam]

When is the next HTFYA YouTube Live Stream?
I have it penciled in on my calendar for the 3rd Thurs. = June 15th (@ 1PM Pacific / 2PM Mountain).

Is this correct? (Sorry if I missed the memo. I couldn't find an announcement in my emails or online.)

[Enni Heikura]

Would love to be critiqued! Here is my illustration.

[Anita Okoye]

I appreciate the critique! My instagram : https://www.instagram.com/anita.okoye/

[Enni Heikura]

I would love to have critique with this ones!

[allysa]

I would love to submit this for the HTFYA - as always, grateful for any advice!!![alt text]

[Lee White]

We are doing a How to Fix Your Art tomorrow. So keep them coming! : )

[Enni Heikura]

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[Sara Therese Art]

@Lee-White Here are a few I would love for you to consider. Thank you!

[ksfabian]

[ksfabian]