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    • Amy sa
      Amy sa last edited by

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      Adjusted it a bit, played with light and shadows also recolored it, It's much better now, but I still want crits on this for further improvement,
      Also need advise for beginners I can make a full page like this but many books include creative graphic design which I've no experience on.

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      • stephanie
        stephanie last edited by

        Here! I'll add this to the pile. Hope it comes in handy! Loving HTFYA. Hoping you keep up that monthly draw-overs & drawing crits, as an ongoing promotion of SVSlearn and the How To Fix Your Art booklet, once it's done.🤞

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        • Anika Tasnim
          Anika Tasnim last edited by

          Would love to be considered for critiques. Thanks in advance!
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            • kayleenartlover
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              • Miriam
                Miriam @mcoxart last edited by

                @mcoxart I remember watching an SVS critique on a tornado illustration where it was pointed out that the objects in the tornado were still right-side up, instead of oriented in all directions.

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                • Miriam
                  Miriam last edited by

                  When is the next HTFYA YouTube Live Stream?
                  I have it penciled in on my calendar for the 3rd Thurs. = June 15th (@ 1PM Pacific / 2PM Mountain).

                  Is this correct? (Sorry if I missed the memo. I couldn't find an announcement in my emails or online.)

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                  • Enni Heikura
                    Enni Heikura last edited by

                    Would love to be critiqued! Here is my illustration.

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                    • Anita Okoye
                      Anita Okoye last edited by

                      I appreciate the critique! My instagram : https://www.instagram.com/anita.okoye/

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                      • Enni Heikura
                        Enni Heikura last edited by

                        I would love to have critique with this ones!night101.jpg ddeemo69.jpg

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                        • allysa
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                          I would love to submit this for the HTFYA - as always, grateful for any advice!!![alt text]IMG_3426.jpeg

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                          • Lee White
                            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            We are doing a How to Fix Your Art tomorrow. So keep them coming! : )

                            SVS Faculty Instructor
                            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                              • Sara Therese Art
                                Sara Therese Art @Lee White last edited by

                                @Lee-White Here are a few I would love for you to consider. Thank you!

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                                Sara Therese
                                https://sarathereseart.com
                                Instagram: @sarathereseart

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                                • ksfabian
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                                    • LisaF
                                      LisaF SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                      Hi everyone! Just fyi, our next HTFYA livestream is on Oct 19 and we could use some art!

                                      This will be the last livestream where any image goes. Go ahead and post any art you're not quite sure how to fix🤓

                                      Starting with the November livestream, submissions will be based on a prompt (learn more here).

                                      The next livestream is on Oct 19 at 2pm MDT. It'll be @Will-Terry and @Lee-White this time!

                                      Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
                                      lisa@svslearn.com

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                                      • willicreate
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                                        Thanks for the consideration.

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                                          • alexw
                                            alexw last edited by

                                            These are digitally drawn designs I completed for two separate environmental service flyers. They have a mascot dog named Rufus that is required in all of the front face flyers. So the open spacing on top and bottom was used for typography (see the thumbnails below.)

                                            Below are small thumbnails of the flyers so you can see the typography layouts. (Which I also was paid to do as graphic design services)

                                            Thank you so much for your considerations! 🙂

                                            P.S. The Fall themed piece is the latest one. It was a 20 hour experiment of style and composition.

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