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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • Miriam
      Miriam last edited by Miriam

      How To Post Images
      (There was a question on the HTFYA YouTube chat today.)

      1. Click on the blue "REPLY" button at the upper right of the page.
        This will open a pop-up window. You can type text on the left half (the right half of the window shows how your post will appear, since you can add images & formatting).

      2. Click on the "Upload Image" icon:
        Image Upload Icon.png
        (If you hover your mouse over the icons, you can see the name of the icon.)

      3. A window will open to select a file. Navigate to the saved image, & double click or select it and click "Open".

      Done! (You should see some text appear on the left side of the comment window, and the picture you selected should show up on the right side of the window.)

      You can include text before &/or after the image. (To avoid short bits of text next to your image, make sure to start a new paragraph before inserting the image (by pressing "Enter" or "Return" on your keyboard, & doing the same again after your image.)

      Click the blue "✓Submit" button to post.

      (After you have posted your comment, you can edit it by clicking the vertical 3-dot menu icon "︙" at the bottom right of your post & selecting "✎Edit".)

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      • Pamela Fraley
        Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Katherine last edited by

        @Katherine Is this a dream land? It sucked me in right away! I love your style and the color palette you used!

        instagram.com/fraleycreates

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        • Sarah VanDam
          Sarah VanDam @skeletortoise last edited by

          @skeletortoise I absolutely love the humor you’ve got going here! 😆

          https://sarahvandam.art/
          Instagram: @sarahvandam.art and @artistsandbox.etsy

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          • Miriam
            Miriam @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

            @Georgios-Christopoulos I like the Candle Gnome 🙂

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            • Georgios Christopoulos
              Georgios Christopoulos @Miriam last edited by

              @Miriam thanks!he was fun to come up with!

              Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
              Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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              • mcoxart
                mcoxart last edited by mcoxart

                I illustrated a (self-published) kid's book a couple of years ago, here's one illustration which I consider to be among the weakest.

                Background: The characters put on a "Wizard of Oz" school play. Off-stage, a character with magical powers creates a real-life tornado to make the play more exciting, which takes everyone by surprise. This illustration is meant to convey the fever-pitch of chaos that occurs in the auditorium, as the tornado snatches up objects from the audience -- grandma's dentures, the Principal's toupee, the Superintendent's pink purse, etc. I will say the illustration demanded a level of technical skill that was beyond me at the time, and I'd be grateful to anyone willing to "rip it apart" so I can do this better next time!

                the illustration that made it into the book (yikes):
                03TornadoRGB.png

                another composition attempt:
                rough tornado2.png

                https://www.instagram.com/mcoxart/
                https://www.youtube.com/@Spinnick

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                • Amy sa
                  Amy sa last edited by

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                  (Middle class girl in fancy mall, She's at the eating portion with lots of decoration, She was surprised to see cristmas tree in summer so she decided to take a selfie)

                  Made the character with colors, but for the background i wanted to do grayscale version first and then color. The background is not looking as I thought.
                  I'm a very begginner to this, and it's my first illustration for childrens book but I do know how to use photoshop and have some drawung skills. it'ld be really helpful if you make an critic on this.
                  ~Amy

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                  • Amy sa
                    Amy sa last edited by

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                    • Amy sa
                      Amy sa last edited by

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                      Adjusted it a bit, played with light and shadows also recolored it, It's much better now, but I still want crits on this for further improvement,
                      Also need advise for beginners I can make a full page like this but many books include creative graphic design which I've no experience on.

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                      • stephanie
                        stephanie last edited by

                        Here! I'll add this to the pile. Hope it comes in handy! Loving HTFYA. Hoping you keep up that monthly draw-overs & drawing crits, as an ongoing promotion of SVSlearn and the How To Fix Your Art booklet, once it's done.🤞

                        Stephanie-Sauve-Glow-Submission-2022.jpg

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                        • Anika Tasnim
                          Anika Tasnim last edited by

                          Would love to be considered for critiques. Thanks in advance!
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                            tamatea16.art @Lee White last edited by

                            @Lee-White 28A8AE14-8A97-4A77-9F4D-86014E80A908.jpeg

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                            • kayleenartlover
                              kayleenartlover last edited by

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                              • Miriam
                                Miriam @mcoxart last edited by

                                @mcoxart I remember watching an SVS critique on a tornado illustration where it was pointed out that the objects in the tornado were still right-side up, instead of oriented in all directions.

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                                • Miriam
                                  Miriam last edited by

                                  When is the next HTFYA YouTube Live Stream?
                                  I have it penciled in on my calendar for the 3rd Thurs. = June 15th (@ 1PM Pacific / 2PM Mountain).

                                  Is this correct? (Sorry if I missed the memo. I couldn't find an announcement in my emails or online.)

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                                  • Enni Heikura
                                    Enni Heikura last edited by

                                    Would love to be critiqued! Here is my illustration.

                                    icecreamtest62.jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                                    https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                                    • Anita Okoye
                                      Anita Okoye last edited by

                                      I appreciate the critique! My instagram : https://www.instagram.com/anita.okoye/

                                      View recent photos.jpeg

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                                      • Enni Heikura
                                        Enni Heikura last edited by

                                        I would love to have critique with this ones!night101.jpg ddeemo69.jpg

                                        https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                                        https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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                                        • allysa
                                          allysa last edited by

                                          I would love to submit this for the HTFYA - as always, grateful for any advice!!![alt text]IMG_3426.jpeg

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                                          • Lee White
                                            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            We are doing a How to Fix Your Art tomorrow. So keep them coming! : )

                                            SVS Faculty Instructor
                                            www.leewhiteillustration.com

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