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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • AustinShurtliff
      AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Malachi Hudelson last edited by

      @Malachi-Hudelson great work!

      Austin Shurtliff
      austin@svslearn.com

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      • alexw
        alexw last edited by alexw

        Here is my submission for "Flight" HTFYA in November! 20 hours of work!

        Wendy's_Airplane_-_Final.jpg

        EDIT: I was given some great advice to provide the black and white version. I really tried to understand how black and white values translate into color. I realized that sky is not light grey but close to 30-40% grey it seems.

        WIP6 Wendy's Airplane Grayscale.jpg

        Looking forward to the critique!

        https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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        • ksfabian
          ksfabian last edited by

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          ksfabiancreations.com

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            Tamzin @AustinShurtliff last edited by

            @AustinShurtliff - it’s lovely to see all the different interpretations:) - I would love some feedback on mine- this is part of a series I am doing on a story of Catworld- any and all feedback appreciated thank you- this was done in procreate- thanks! TamzinIMG_2533.jpeg

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            • Jackson Adams
              Jackson Adams last edited by

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              • dinky
                dinky last edited by

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                  HollyOakley @amaryllis last edited by

                  @amaryllis soooo good. Love the story!!

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                  • Ryan
                    Ryan last edited by

                    Hello all! I've followed 3PP since the first episode; so thankful for the direction 3PP/SVS has provided over the years.
                    This is my first time submitting a post for HTFYA... it's tempting to want to explain my process/intention behind this, but if it doesn't read clearly without commentary then that probably means I have a bit more work to do! πŸ™‚ So grateful for any critique and feedback - it can be painful, that's okay! That's how I'm going to grow. πŸ™‚

                    Thank you so much for the chance to submit and be a part of HTFYA.

                    Book_A_Ride.jpg

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                    • TheresaMuth
                      TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                      FInal -- I'll post some other versions in another Thread... I'm not sure this one is the best, but it was the Final version. Whew!Theresa Muth HTFYA-23-Nov Final.jpg

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                      • Jason Crowley
                        Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                        I had a few ideas for the flight prompt, here's another one. This time mixing traditional and digital.

                        Flight2-Jason-Crowley.jpg

                        https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                        https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                          CMMillustration last edited by

                          Hi guys!
                          Here is a slightly different take on the concept of flight... πŸ‘»
                          And definitely in keeping with the Halloween season - it's a scene of a group of teens having a seance
                          Levitate-Light-as-a-feather.jpg

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                          • makekong
                            makekong @Jason Crowley last edited by

                            @Jason-Crowley this is wonderful!

                            Stroogle.xyz (webcomic)

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                            • KevinTreaccar
                              KevinTreaccar last edited by

                              This knight chose flight over fight...

                              HTFYA-Flight-10-23-KevinTreaccar.jpg

                              kevintreaccar.com
                              instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                              • alexw
                                alexw last edited by

                                I updated my post FYI. I wasn't sure how to inform about it, so I'm posting it here. You can see my edit above.

                                https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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                                • JoshSchouwstra
                                  JoshSchouwstra @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                  HTFYA_Nov2023_JSchouwstra.jpg

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                                    michaeldavidh last edited by

                                    Do you want to get your wings CLIPPED, Private!

                                    IMG_0248.jpeg

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                                      Jill-Tuckman last edited by

                                      Here is my submission for "Flight." I'm not sure if the story is coming through. It is great to see everyone's work!JillTuckman_Flight.jpg

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                                        amaryllis @HollyOakley last edited by

                                        @HollyOakley Thank you, I had a great time creating it!

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                                        • Russ Van Dine
                                          Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                          Just to be entirely clear, this means I can post tomorrow and it is in the competition, right?

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                                          • LauraA
                                            LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                            @AustinShurtliff

                                            This is a WIP from before the flight prompt was even out, though I already posted a version with purple walls on my IG. I can't seem to proceed to full rendering and colored linework because it feels like I took a wrong turn somewhere. I wanted an angled perspective because it's chaotic, but it feels like it has too many moving parts. If you choose to critique this, you'll be doing me a huge favor. Thanks!

                                            Bird-Chase-gallery-HTFYA.jpg

                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                            http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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