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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • alexw
      alexw last edited by alexw

      Here is my submission for "Flight" HTFYA in November! 20 hours of work!

      Wendy's_Airplane_-_Final.jpg

      EDIT: I was given some great advice to provide the black and white version. I really tried to understand how black and white values translate into color. I realized that sky is not light grey but close to 30-40% grey it seems.

      WIP6 Wendy's Airplane Grayscale.jpg

      Looking forward to the critique!

      https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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      • ksfabian
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        ksfabiancreations.com

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          Tamzin @AustinShurtliff last edited by

          @AustinShurtliff - it’s lovely to see all the different interpretations:) - I would love some feedback on mine- this is part of a series I am doing on a story of Catworld- any and all feedback appreciated thank you- this was done in procreate- thanks! TamzinIMG_2533.jpeg

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          • Jackson Adams
            Jackson Adams last edited by

            flight.jpg

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            • dinky
              dinky last edited by

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                HollyOakley @amaryllis last edited by

                @amaryllis soooo good. Love the story!!

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                • Ryan
                  Ryan last edited by

                  Hello all! I've followed 3PP since the first episode; so thankful for the direction 3PP/SVS has provided over the years.
                  This is my first time submitting a post for HTFYA... it's tempting to want to explain my process/intention behind this, but if it doesn't read clearly without commentary then that probably means I have a bit more work to do! πŸ™‚ So grateful for any critique and feedback - it can be painful, that's okay! That's how I'm going to grow. πŸ™‚

                  Thank you so much for the chance to submit and be a part of HTFYA.

                  Book_A_Ride.jpg

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                  • TheresaMuth
                    TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                    FInal -- I'll post some other versions in another Thread... I'm not sure this one is the best, but it was the Final version. Whew!Theresa Muth HTFYA-23-Nov Final.jpg

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                    • Jason Crowley
                      Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                      I had a few ideas for the flight prompt, here's another one. This time mixing traditional and digital.

                      Flight2-Jason-Crowley.jpg

                      https://www.jasoncrowley.art
                      https://www.instagram.com/jason_crowley/

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                        CMMillustration last edited by

                        Hi guys!
                        Here is a slightly different take on the concept of flight... πŸ‘»
                        And definitely in keeping with the Halloween season - it's a scene of a group of teens having a seance
                        Levitate-Light-as-a-feather.jpg

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                        • makekong
                          makekong @Jason Crowley last edited by

                          @Jason-Crowley this is wonderful!

                          Stroogle.xyz (webcomic)

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                          • KevinTreaccar
                            KevinTreaccar last edited by

                            This knight chose flight over fight...

                            HTFYA-Flight-10-23-KevinTreaccar.jpg

                            kevintreaccar.com
                            instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                            • alexw
                              alexw last edited by

                              I updated my post FYI. I wasn't sure how to inform about it, so I'm posting it here. You can see my edit above.

                              https://www.instagram.com/alexwcreative/

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                              • JoshSchouwstra
                                JoshSchouwstra @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                HTFYA_Nov2023_JSchouwstra.jpg

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                                  michaeldavidh last edited by

                                  Do you want to get your wings CLIPPED, Private!

                                  IMG_0248.jpeg

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                                    Jill-Tuckman last edited by

                                    Here is my submission for "Flight." I'm not sure if the story is coming through. It is great to see everyone's work!JillTuckman_Flight.jpg

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                                      amaryllis @HollyOakley last edited by

                                      @HollyOakley Thank you, I had a great time creating it!

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                                      • Russ Van Dine
                                        Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                        Just to be entirely clear, this means I can post tomorrow and it is in the competition, right?

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                                        • LauraA
                                          LauraA SVS OG @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                          @AustinShurtliff

                                          This is a WIP from before the flight prompt was even out, though I already posted a version with purple walls on my IG. I can't seem to proceed to full rendering and colored linework because it feels like I took a wrong turn somewhere. I wanted an angled perspective because it's chaotic, but it feels like it has too many moving parts. If you choose to critique this, you'll be doing me a huge favor. Thanks!

                                          Bird-Chase-gallery-HTFYA.jpg

                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                          • AustinShurtliff
                                            AustinShurtliff SVS Team @Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                            @Russ-Van-Dine, yes, the upload deadline is the first of the month. So you just need to have it uploaded before November 2nd.

                                            Austin Shurtliff
                                            austin@svslearn.com

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