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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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      CMMillustration @JennyWren last edited by

      @JennyWren
      this is so amazing! I love it!

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      • Lea Marie Ravotti
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        • Norman Morana
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          • Norman Morana
            Norman Morana last edited by

            Hey Gang, its cool to see the prompts return, I thought I'd try it out.

            Right now I'm focused on building out new work for my shop.

            NormanMorana_Flight.jpg

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            • Samanta
              Samanta last edited by

              Hi all, this is my submission for the November HTFYA 🙂

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              https://www.instagram.com/mantascorner/

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              • Lea Marie Ravotti
                Lea Marie Ravotti @Samanta last edited by

                @Samanta ![alt text](IMG_1356.jpeg image url)

                Hello, here is one I got stuck with. Had troubles uploading, some text showing up instead of the image, hopefully not posting double image here
                Thank you! Lea

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                • Robyn Hepburn
                  Robyn Hepburn @justjax last edited by

                  @justjax This made me giggle. 🧡😄

                  https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
                  www.robynhepburn.com

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                    kasia_lyman last edited by

                    Hello everyone! This is my first time posting anything on this forum, just started trying out SVS a few weeks ago 🙂 It's fun to see all the submissions and how different and original they are! Greetings from Sweden!
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                    • KathrynAdebayo
                      KathrynAdebayo @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                      @AustinShurtliff

                      🙂
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                      • Russ Van Dine
                        Russ Van Dine @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                        @AustinShurtliff hummingbird pizza delivery1.jpg

                        Hummingbird pizza delivery. The plot thickens with the two wolves hiding in the background.

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                        • Gargi goyal
                          Gargi goyal last edited by

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                          • mag
                            mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            Hi you all!
                            I am sooooo happy the prompts are back! 🙂
                            Lovely autumn, everyone ♥ flight.jpg

                            Mag
                            https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                            http://mag.takac.name

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                            • AustinShurtliff
                              AustinShurtliff SVS Team @kasia_lyman last edited by

                              @kasia_lyman so happy you are here and great work on your first submission!

                              Austin Shurtliff
                              austin@svslearn.com

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                              • RobinCampbellArt
                                RobinCampbellArt last edited by

                                Hi-
                                A submission for "Flight"!FlightSVS-RobinCampbell.png

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                                • Jeremy Ross
                                  Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                  I colored the piece and prefer to go with this one rather than the black and white piece shown previously.

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                                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                                  • Jeremy Ross
                                    Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                                    I hope it’s not too late! I had another idea and thought it would be cool to have a duck and squirrel fly an old Navy Boeing Kaydet.

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                                    https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                                    • RobinCampbellArt
                                      RobinCampbellArt @michaeldavidh last edited by

                                      @michaeldavidh
                                      Hi Michael- your take on the “flight” prompt is neat, these little birds have a mighty tough-looking flight instructor.
                                      The the next thought I had was the plane in the background is compositionally in the instructors mouth which is creating some confusion. It kind of looks like the instructor is eating it. You may only need to adjust the composition to solve, but there are potentially other solutions too. The plane could be blurred slightly along building since they are in the background.
                                      Also the flag behind the instructor is interfering with the silhouette of the flight instructor because it has similar colors…it makes the instructor look like he’s grown a fin. I’d move the either the flag or the instructor, change the color of the flag, or make it so they are not touching.
                                      Is the plane going to be used by the little birds instead of flying with their own wings? The plane may not need to be there or could be on display less prominently if the little birds aren’t planning to use it and it’s more of a prop.
                                      Looking forward to the next “Fix Your Art” live event:-)
                                      Robin

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                                      • AustinShurtliff
                                        AustinShurtliff SVS Team @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                        @KathrynAdebayo, sorry it took so long to get back to you about this! This is what I was told:

                                        Yeah, I would still say that we do have an age requirement of 18 to use any of SVS's services. Not that there's anything inappropriate in the content, but none of it was developed with kids in mind. SVS has always been geared more toward college age+ students. However, if an under-18 student were using SVS with the guidance of a parent or legal guardian, we would be fine with that.

                                        I hope that helps! Feel free to ask if anything specific comes up.

                                        Austin Shurtliff
                                        austin@svslearn.com

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                                          michaeldavidh @RobinCampbellArt last edited by

                                          @RobinCampbellArt Wow! Thanks for The insights. Well taken.

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                                          • KathrynAdebayo
                                            KathrynAdebayo @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                            @AustinShurtliff Hi Austin, thanks very much for getting back to me about that. Sounds good!

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