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    November 2023 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Norman Morana
      Norman Morana last edited by

      Hey Gang, its cool to see the prompts return, I thought I'd try it out.

      Right now I'm focused on building out new work for my shop.

      NormanMorana_Flight.jpg

      Onwards,

      Norman

      normanmoranaillustration.com
      instagram.com/norman_morana/

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      • Samanta
        Samanta last edited by

        Hi all, this is my submission for the November HTFYA 🙂

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        https://www.instagram.com/mantascorner/

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        • Lea Marie Ravotti
          Lea Marie Ravotti @Samanta last edited by

          @Samanta ![alt text](IMG_1356.jpeg image url)

          Hello, here is one I got stuck with. Had troubles uploading, some text showing up instead of the image, hopefully not posting double image here
          Thank you! Lea

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          • Robyn Hepburn
            Robyn Hepburn @justjax last edited by

            @justjax This made me giggle. 🧡😄

            https://www.instagram.com/robynhepburnillustrates/
            www.robynhepburn.com

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            • K
              kasia_lyman last edited by

              Hello everyone! This is my first time posting anything on this forum, just started trying out SVS a few weeks ago 🙂 It's fun to see all the submissions and how different and original they are! Greetings from Sweden!
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              • KathrynAdebayo
                KathrynAdebayo @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                @AustinShurtliff

                🙂
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                • Russ Van Dine
                  Russ Van Dine @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                  @AustinShurtliff hummingbird pizza delivery1.jpg

                  Hummingbird pizza delivery. The plot thickens with the two wolves hiding in the background.

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                  • Gargi goyal
                    Gargi goyal last edited by

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                    • mag
                      mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Hi you all!
                      I am sooooo happy the prompts are back! 🙂
                      Lovely autumn, everyone ♥ flight.jpg

                      Mag
                      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                      http://mag.takac.name

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                      • AustinShurtliff
                        AustinShurtliff SVS Team @kasia_lyman last edited by

                        @kasia_lyman so happy you are here and great work on your first submission!

                        Austin Shurtliff
                        austin@svslearn.com

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                        • RobinCampbellArt
                          RobinCampbellArt last edited by

                          Hi-
                          A submission for "Flight"!FlightSVS-RobinCampbell.png

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                          • Jeremy Ross
                            Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                            I colored the piece and prefer to go with this one rather than the black and white piece shown previously.

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                            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
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                            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                            • Jeremy Ross
                              Jeremy Ross @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                              I hope it’s not too late! I had another idea and thought it would be cool to have a duck and squirrel fly an old Navy Boeing Kaydet.

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                              https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                              https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
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                              • RobinCampbellArt
                                RobinCampbellArt @michaeldavidh last edited by

                                @michaeldavidh
                                Hi Michael- your take on the “flight” prompt is neat, these little birds have a mighty tough-looking flight instructor.
                                The the next thought I had was the plane in the background is compositionally in the instructors mouth which is creating some confusion. It kind of looks like the instructor is eating it. You may only need to adjust the composition to solve, but there are potentially other solutions too. The plane could be blurred slightly along building since they are in the background.
                                Also the flag behind the instructor is interfering with the silhouette of the flight instructor because it has similar colors…it makes the instructor look like he’s grown a fin. I’d move the either the flag or the instructor, change the color of the flag, or make it so they are not touching.
                                Is the plane going to be used by the little birds instead of flying with their own wings? The plane may not need to be there or could be on display less prominently if the little birds aren’t planning to use it and it’s more of a prop.
                                Looking forward to the next “Fix Your Art” live event:-)
                                Robin

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                                • AustinShurtliff
                                  AustinShurtliff SVS Team @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                  @KathrynAdebayo, sorry it took so long to get back to you about this! This is what I was told:

                                  Yeah, I would still say that we do have an age requirement of 18 to use any of SVS's services. Not that there's anything inappropriate in the content, but none of it was developed with kids in mind. SVS has always been geared more toward college age+ students. However, if an under-18 student were using SVS with the guidance of a parent or legal guardian, we would be fine with that.

                                  I hope that helps! Feel free to ask if anything specific comes up.

                                  Austin Shurtliff
                                  austin@svslearn.com

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                                    michaeldavidh @RobinCampbellArt last edited by

                                    @RobinCampbellArt Wow! Thanks for The insights. Well taken.

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                                    • KathrynAdebayo
                                      KathrynAdebayo @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                      @AustinShurtliff Hi Austin, thanks very much for getting back to me about that. Sounds good!

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                                      • TheresaMuth
                                        TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                        @AustinShurtliff So, this is the first time I've submitted anything for critique (Critique Arena or HTFYA). Is the chosen picture announced ahead of time? Or is it "Tune In to SEE WHO's ART WAS CHOSEN"?
                                        Also, I would love to watch LIVE. It will be next Thursday - 11/16, yes? At What time ?
                                        Thanks!!

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                                        • AustinShurtliff
                                          AustinShurtliff SVS Team @TheresaMuth last edited by

                                          @TheresaMuth, this week's livestream is on Thursday at 2 p.m. MT. We used to announce who would be selected for the top 16 for Critique Arena a few days early, but we haven't done that with HTFYA.

                                          Austin Shurtliff
                                          austin@svslearn.com

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                                          • TheresaMuth
                                            TheresaMuth @AustinShurtliff last edited by

                                            @AustinShurtliff 2pm MT. That's great. Thank you!!

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