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    February 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Jessica Jolicoeur
      Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

      I'm hoping I can still submit mine. It's almost done. Does anyone know if there is submission deadline?

      Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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      • Reb Erlik
        Reb Erlik last edited by

        Reb Erlik htfya.jpg

        This is a digital study to plan a future gouache painting.

        If this piece is selected for critique, I would most appreciate feedback on improving composition, lighting or especially color. Thanks!

        Style inspiration is "Short story #2" by Chiara Bautista:
        https://www.facebook.com/photo/?fbid=733357601479235&set=a.733357588145903

        https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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        • Jessica Jolicoeur
          Jessica Jolicoeur last edited by

          FebruarySVSLearnsSubmission- TRAPPED.jpg

          Jessica Jolicoeur - https://jessicajolicoeur.wixsite.com/jessicajolicoeur

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          • skeletortoise
            skeletortoise @AustinShurtliff last edited by

            @AustinShurtliff FINAL.jpg

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            • Larue
              Larue @Enni Heikura last edited by

              @Enni-Heikura
              I think this would work well as an editorial piece!

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              • Larue
                Larue @skeletortoise last edited by

                @skeletortoise
                I like you’re color palette, there is no question as to who main character is, good story building.

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                • Larue
                  Larue @Joshua Chennault last edited by

                  @Joshua-Chennault
                  I really like your color palette, character design and graphic style!

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                  • Larue
                    Larue @Laurie Sawyer last edited by

                    @Laurie-Sawyer
                    Cute story telling. I can hear her laughing.

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                    • Tom Harshberger
                      Tom Harshberger @skeletortoise last edited by

                      @skeletortoise This turned out great!! well done.

                      instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                      • Reb Erlik
                        Reb Erlik @skeletortoise last edited by

                        @skeletortoise Love how your piece turned out! Very nice color choices, especially on the jar. You went all out on the details in the room and made some smart choices about how to combine your two layouts. Window plus observatory was a great solution. And the concept is more clear now with all the other labeled star jars. Very cool!

                        https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                        • Reb Erlik
                          Reb Erlik @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                          @Jeremy-Ross Awesome! You're knocking this shape language stuff out of the park! That shark has so many scary triangles! I really appreciate that you took the time to check out my book recommendation and I hope it was helpful.

                          https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                          • skeletortoise
                            skeletortoise @skeletortoise last edited by

                            @skeletortoise @AustinShurtliff
                            Forgot to name my file correctly. Sorry about that and thanks.

                            Sarah Emery Feb HTFYA.jpg

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                            • skeletortoise
                              skeletortoise @Tom Harshberger last edited by

                              @Tom-Harshberger @Larue thank you both! 🙂

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                              • Laurie Sawyer
                                Laurie Sawyer @Larue last edited by

                                @Larue Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun telling this story!

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                                • Jeremy Ross
                                  Jeremy Ross @Reb Erlik last edited by

                                  Thanks @reberlik ! I love the book and plan on making more pieces based on the concepts.

                                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                                  https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                                  https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                                  https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                                  • Reb Erlik
                                    Reb Erlik @Reb Erlik last edited by

                                    @reberlik I'd like to include the linework for my piece as well if that's okay.
                                    I've been looking at it the past few days on various screens and thinking the details may not be visible. Thanks!

                                    reb erlik linework.jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                                    • makekong
                                      makekong last edited by

                                      I love that the the next two prompts are related, maybe next year the HTFYA will be 12 consecutive prompts so you end up with a book you can keep.

                                      Stroogle.xyz (webcomic)

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                                      • Ayesha Masood
                                        Ayesha Masood last edited by

                                        Here is my entry for ‘trapped’

                                        IMG_0818.jpeg

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                                        • Enni Heikura
                                          Enni Heikura @Larue last edited by

                                          @Larue oh thank you! Maybe you are right 🙂

                                          https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
                                          https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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