Jack Leapt: Lets share our inspiration and WIPs!!
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@R-Fey-Realme Great advice, R. Fey, thanks for sharing! Lee goes over his steps in more detail in the Visual Storytelling class.
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@R-Fey-Realme You always come up with something creative and out of the box! It elevates the narrative of 'boy doesn't want a dog' by adding the element of reincarnation.
It feels both hopeful and sad somehow... my interpretation of the message is that it takes an entire lifetime to change yourself into who you wish you could be... to transform from the ordinary (normal dog) to extraordinary (mythical creature).
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Hi, this is a bit of an embarrassing question
, but as a non-native English speaker, I don't quite understand the topic of the assignment. So, is the griffin somewhere below or sinking down, and is Jack up on the castle's edge?And is Jack taking a leap somewhere? Or is the griffin flying somewhere?Sorry if I'm being confusing, the location/activity of the griffin isn't quite clear to me
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Hi, my understanding is that Jack, whether animal, human etc is leaping from a location onto the gryphon as he is flying by, near, under him. I’m staying vague because I don’t want to limit your imagination! Good luck! -
@Enni-Heikura It is worded kinda vague, I guess to leave it up to interpretation of the illustrators, but it's also too many words for a regular picture book page. So you could probably pick a moment out of this paragraph rather than capturing the whole thing written, if that makes sense.
At first I read the griffin as a danger for Jack to act quickly but he could also be trying to time it right in jumping off the tower to land on top of the griffin.
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I'm not sure I'll get this finished this month. I've started work on a personal project, so the very limited time I have for illustration will most likely be taken up with that. I liked the idea of having this image follow on from my previous illustration for the Gryphon prompt. I also wanted this illustration to be a cold blue with warm highlights, because my previous image was a warm orange with cold blue in the shadows. I wanted to do it quickly too, so I missed out the traditional pencil phase and just started painting in photoshop to save time. Anyway, maybe I will get it finished, who knows, but here is how far I've got. Hope you guys have a blast with this months prompt and can't wait to see what everyone comes up with.
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Thank you @kayleenartlover and @Larue for your help!!Perhaps I understand now that the griffin is on Jack's side. Before I thought the griffin was his enemy... so this helps a lot!
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@Enni-Heikura My understanding is, you could do it either way -- griffin is on Jack's side or griffin is a threat that Jack is trying to escape from -- it's up to you to decide what the story is.
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@GabeRobinson Thank you for your answer! I think it is more clear to me now
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Hey guys
just wanted to post some thumbnails etc. I've been working on, any feedback is helpful... just playing around with ideas and perspectives... I struggle with perspective, so looking at reference pics has been helpful. I'll have more to post up I think, but I wanted to put these up before I headed off to work!
Have a great Thursday where ever you are in the world!
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Today's live stream inspired me to start on the April prompt. Not sure if I will make it in time, but here's the start.
The idea is that Jack is a bandit jumping to get away from the law. I'm not sure if the lasso mid-jump makes sense(or if I will be able to draw the physics of it), but it seemed like a a good dynamic pose when thumbnailing. Would love to hear thoughts on it!
PS. The gryphon is a turkey vulture and a horse
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I think I’m liking the composition on the bottom thumbnail, but not sure which version to do, with the griffin on the left or right?
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@kayleenartlover those look great! Action should generally read left to right, so i recommend the right version! Cant wait to see it!
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@MarcRobinson Ooh, very cinematic! this scene reminds me of the golden eagle who saves Gandalf. And just as epic.
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@kayleenartlover I agree, the Right one. These panels look great, it is very clear what is going on, there's a nice rhythm to the angles and zooms.
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@J-Morgan-Looney the 2nd one with the arrow pointing to it could work. Maybe the hind legs of the griffin could bend forward a little and the lasso be nearly hooked on. The lasso could still be open/slack or whatever the technical lassoing term is. I like how everything is silhouetted. And I just happened to see a turkey vulture for the first time a couple days ago. They are magnificent! Nice choice.
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@jenn hey thanks Jenn I appreciate it.
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@jenn thanks for the input. Started moving in the direction of Jack riding the gryphon, but I think I will revisit the lasso pose with your feedback!
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Hello all,
My idea this month is to draw a pirate who has just stolen from the gold hoard in a tower. I’ve interpreted the “swooping low” as the griffin being in pursuit of Jack and Jack has to jump to get away, though in a couple of comps I played with Jack being chased by other pirates and the griffin is helping him.
I’ve done some composition sketching, but I’m concerned not everything is lining up with the prompt. Will it look like he’s trying to jump to the ship instead of just into the water? Will it look like the griffin is his friend? Is it a problem if Jack isn’t exactly at the edge of the tower but instead outside of it? Any feedback would be appreciated!
As a clarifying note: in #1, 4, 5 the griffin is after him, and in #2, 3 the griffin is helping him while bad pirates are chasing him.
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I designed Jack even though he'll be pretty small in the final illustration, next is just the griffin before putting it all together
