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    Jack Leapt: Lets share our inspiration and WIPs!!

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    • Larue
      Larue @Enni Heikura last edited by

      @Enni-Heikura
      Hi, my understanding is that Jack, whether animal, human etc is leaping from a location onto the gryphon as he is flying by, near, under him. I’m staying vague because I don’t want to limit your imagination! Good luck!

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      • kayleenartlover
        kayleenartlover @Enni Heikura last edited by

        @Enni-Heikura It is worded kinda vague, I guess to leave it up to interpretation of the illustrators, but it's also too many words for a regular picture book page. So you could probably pick a moment out of this paragraph rather than capturing the whole thing written, if that makes sense.
        At first I read the griffin as a danger for Jack to act quickly but he could also be trying to time it right in jumping off the tower to land on top of the griffin.
        Hope this helps.

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        • MarcRobinson
          MarcRobinson last edited by

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          I'm not sure I'll get this finished this month. I've started work on a personal project, so the very limited time I have for illustration will most likely be taken up with that. I liked the idea of having this image follow on from my previous illustration for the Gryphon prompt. I also wanted this illustration to be a cold blue with warm highlights, because my previous image was a warm orange with cold blue in the shadows. I wanted to do it quickly too, so I missed out the traditional pencil phase and just started painting in photoshop to save time. Anyway, maybe I will get it finished, who knows, but here is how far I've got. Hope you guys have a blast with this months prompt and can't wait to see what everyone comes up with.

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          • Enni Heikura
            Enni Heikura last edited by

            Thank you @kayleenartlover and @Larue for your help!!Perhaps I understand now that the griffin is on Jack's side. Before I thought the griffin was his enemy... so this helps a lot!🙏

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              GabeRobinson @Enni Heikura last edited by

              @Enni-Heikura My understanding is, you could do it either way -- griffin is on Jack's side or griffin is a threat that Jack is trying to escape from -- it's up to you to decide what the story is.

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              • Enni Heikura
                Enni Heikura @GabeRobinson last edited by

                @GabeRobinson Thank you for your answer! I think it is more clear to me now 🙂

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                • Katt
                  Katt last edited by

                  Hey guys
                  just wanted to post some thumbnails etc. I've been working on, any feedback is helpful... just playing around with ideas and perspectives... I struggle with perspective, so looking at reference pics has been helpful. I'll have more to post up I think, but I wanted to put these up before I headed off to work!
                  Have a great Thursday where ever you are in the world!

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                  • J. Morgan Looney
                    J. Morgan Looney last edited by J. Morgan Looney

                    Today's live stream inspired me to start on the April prompt. Not sure if I will make it in time, but here's the start.

                    The idea is that Jack is a bandit jumping to get away from the law. I'm not sure if the lasso mid-jump makes sense(or if I will be able to draw the physics of it), but it seemed like a a good dynamic pose when thumbnailing. Would love to hear thoughts on it!

                    PS. The gryphon is a turkey vulture and a horse
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                    • kayleenartlover
                      kayleenartlover last edited by

                      I think I’m liking the composition on the bottom thumbnail, but not sure which version to do, with the griffin on the left or right?
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                      • Fey Realme
                        Fey Realme @kayleenartlover last edited by

                        @kayleenartlover those look great! Action should generally read left to right, so i recommend the right version! Cant wait to see it!

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                        • jenn
                          jenn @MarcRobinson last edited by

                          @MarcRobinson Ooh, very cinematic! this scene reminds me of the golden eagle who saves Gandalf. And just as epic.

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                          • jenn
                            jenn @kayleenartlover last edited by

                            @kayleenartlover I agree, the Right one. These panels look great, it is very clear what is going on, there's a nice rhythm to the angles and zooms.

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                            • jenn
                              jenn @J. Morgan Looney last edited by jenn

                              @J-Morgan-Looney the 2nd one with the arrow pointing to it could work. Maybe the hind legs of the griffin could bend forward a little and the lasso be nearly hooked on. The lasso could still be open/slack or whatever the technical lassoing term is. I like how everything is silhouetted. And I just happened to see a turkey vulture for the first time a couple days ago. They are magnificent! Nice choice.

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                              • MarcRobinson
                                MarcRobinson @jenn last edited by

                                @jenn hey thanks Jenn I appreciate it.

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                                • J. Morgan Looney
                                  J. Morgan Looney @jenn last edited by

                                  @jenn thanks for the input. Started moving in the direction of Jack riding the gryphon, but I think I will revisit the lasso pose with your feedback!

                                  https://www.instagram.com/looneysketches

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                                  • skeletortoise
                                    skeletortoise last edited by

                                    Hello all,

                                    My idea this month is to draw a pirate who has just stolen from the gold hoard in a tower. I’ve interpreted the “swooping low” as the griffin being in pursuit of Jack and Jack has to jump to get away, though in a couple of comps I played with Jack being chased by other pirates and the griffin is helping him.

                                    I’ve done some composition sketching, but I’m concerned not everything is lining up with the prompt. Will it look like he’s trying to jump to the ship instead of just into the water? Will it look like the griffin is his friend? Is it a problem if Jack isn’t exactly at the edge of the tower but instead outside of it? Any feedback would be appreciated!

                                    As a clarifying note: in #1, 4, 5 the griffin is after him, and in #2, 3 the griffin is helping him while bad pirates are chasing him.

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                                    • kayleenartlover
                                      kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

                                      I designed Jack even though he'll be pretty small in the final illustration, next is just the griffin before putting it all together
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                                      • Fey Realme
                                        Fey Realme @kayleenartlover last edited by

                                        @kayleenartlover that is great! You might consider adding a cloud and a bit more castle to fill in the negative space. I think this is perfect for a book spread, especially if you leave space for text, you have already avoided the gutter beautifully!

                                        Heres what i mean about the castle and the sky

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                                        • kayleenartlover
                                          kayleenartlover last edited by

                                          Just working on the griffin before make slight changes to the background. Thanks for all the comments and critiques ❤️
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                                          • Julia Hegetusch
                                            Julia Hegetusch @kayleenartlover last edited by

                                            @kayleenartlover hi. I love yout tiger griffin design

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