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    Living Underwater - May prompt: let's share our WIPs and inspiration

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    • Reb Erlik
      Reb Erlik last edited by Reb Erlik

      First thing that comes to mind for me is this beautiful story from the early days of CG animation, "Love Found" from The Mind's Eye compilation:

      https://youtu.be/NYBes8ki3lo?feature=shared

      So based on this, the two concepts I'm thinking about exploring for the prompt are:

      -"A bird may love a fish but where would they live?"
      (Swapping the bird and fish for maybe a harpy and mermaid)

      -or the loneliness of living inside a bubble
      (Land creature who lives underwater, isolated from others. Reverse of a "fish out of water")

      Which concept sounds more interesting?

      Is anyone else skipping ahead to the May prompt brainstorming? Feel free to share.

      https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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      • Fey Realme
        Fey Realme @Reb Erlik last edited by

        @reberlik im also trying to skip ahead lol—i want to participate but i want to make some space for my personal project—i am super easily distracted especially bc i really dont want to struggle with where i left the project off haha

        Im thinking of doing a book cover for an idea i had “the little mermaids best friend” or the Israelites crossing the red sea on dry ground scene from the bible… its fun that they are lining the prompt up with Mer-May while still giving some wiggle room if you don’t want to do mermaids

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        • Reb Erlik
          Reb Erlik @Fey Realme last edited by

          @R-Fey-Realme Oh those are awesome ideas! Love how you always think out of the box with the parted red sea floor being literally "under water" 🤣 (Plus who doesn't love a good excuse to rewatch Prince of Egypt for inspiration?).

          Mermaid's best friend could be interesting as long as it's not copying the flounder or a dolphin friend idea from the popular animated versions.

          As far as skipping the April prompt, I think maybe you bit off quite a lot with your idea. But it was cool to hear in the critique that the guys suggested the gryphon costume on the dog, which was the direction you were planning on taking it. If you feel up to it, maybe just do a redesign of your March coverpage and post to the forum?

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          • Fey Realme
            Fey Realme @Reb Erlik last edited by Fey Realme

            @reberlik oh bro we watch that movie every single Sunday (unless we watch the home teachers, which is more of a niche movie). Thanks for the encouragement and kind words, i think more in words so it works a lot better for me to have an idea what is going on behind the picture. I thought it was cool they picked up on the dressed up dog griffin— must be an alright idea. I still feel like the cover i made for the march submission is the best angle i could find for the story that goes behind it, but i am going to redo the drawing on the kids book cover so it looks like he drew it (drawing like a kid is daunting and so hard! They are so confident!) i am submitting for the april prompt actually, i posted my wip earlier today. I really do tend to bite off a lot, but i do try to find the simplest execution and least complicated approach… im still learning a lot about myself and how I work, which is why i really like to participate in these (especially since i could get feedback! That has been so encouraging!)

            And i think i am going the mermaid book cover route, ive had a sort of story motivation bouncing around, and it started coming together just now. Ive just been watching movies with my baby all day (while you were sleeping, princess and the frog, pepa pig) and something about the plots sort of aligned and i might have most of a story to fuel the book cover idea.

            About your question, im not sure which would be more interesting. Im not sure how you would do either of them honestly, i don't really illustrate concepts and sayings. I mostly try to spell out exactly what happening in an image an why for myself before i start drawing… cuz otherwise i cant start

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            • kayleenartlover
              kayleenartlover last edited by

              I just realized, this prompt could also work for MerMay if you want to do that this year haha

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              • Fey Realme
                Fey Realme last edited by Fey Realme

                Hey yall! Are you starting to come out of hibernation from last month’s prompt yet?
                I’ve been using the prompt fatigue to actually make a bit of progress on a personal narrative project—since that story is already thought through i can use different brain muscles to iron out problems and stuff and give the tired story brains a break.
                What do you do in-between prompts?

                Another great hibernation brain thing to do is look at Pinterest! Its funny bc the more images you see on prompt before starting yourself, the better your prompt piece will be! So hibernation brain can actually be a superpower!
                Here are some interesting images I found on Pinterest by searching “living underwater”IMG_4513.jpeg
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                I love the picture of the statue face underwater. I just imagined him as the main character in a story about living underwater, and how the fish and plants and life go on around him and he just sits there all day every day. What sort of story could come from there? Also looking at the images on pinterest i saw how the image was really directed by the character and what their problems would be in their underwater world.

                What character is your baby right now? What problems would they have if they were living underwater? Would they be able to solve those problems?

                Id love to see what you all are finding on pinterest and hear what ideas or characters are licking around in your heads!! Im excited for another great month of prompt hangout time here in the forum!

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                • Larue
                  Larue @Fey Realme last edited by

                  @R-Fey-Realme
                  Nice pins, thanks for the inspiration!

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                  • Joshua Chennault
                    Joshua Chennault last edited by

                    I've got an initial sketch of an idea kicking around. Figured I could do a double whammy, and get something for SVS and the MerMay art challenge.

                    Whenever a prompt comes up that I really like, I tend to jump into a lot of world building and story. Doing so gives me a lot of motivation to take a piece through full illustration. Been working on a whole document for this one, going so far as to work on the culture, society, and tool materials for these Merfolk. Might share bits in my own sketchbook eventually.

                    I like the idea sketch so far. Will dive into proper character design next, before taking the sketch further. Anyway, feel like I've rambled enough, but we'll see if I can pull this off. These interesting perspective shots I've been crafting recently are tough.

                    Joshua Chennault - Hunters - Scree - Sketches.jpg

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                    • skeletortoise
                      skeletortoise last edited by skeletortoise

                      Hi all! Looking forward to getting back into things for this month's prompt!

                      I have been into drawing books and bookstores recently and I was wondering how I might incorporate it into my illo for this month. First, I though "underwater bookstore?" Or maybe the ruins of a bookstore found under water?

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                      Then I was drawing a boat and suddenly I thought "bookstore on a boat!" Mermaids could come to the surface to read since they can't really get books underwater where they live. I hope this still feels like it fits the prompt. In my mind, the mermaids live underwater so they need this resource for when they want to chill and read some books.

                      PXL_20240413_143451342.jpg

                      I also learned that there is a real boat bookstore in London and now I want to go!

                      https://secretldn.com/word-on-the-water-bookshop/

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                      Here are some other images that I'm saving over on Pinterest:

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                      • jenn
                        jenn @skeletortoise last edited by

                        @skeletortoise I like the 'bookstore on a boat for mermaids' idea. That sounds like it has potential!

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                        • jenn
                          jenn @Joshua Chennault last edited by

                          @Joshua-Chennault I like the cropped-in view and the way you were able to express a moment of tension through details. The shapes and linework already show the flow of the water.

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                          • jenn
                            jenn @Fey Realme last edited by

                            @R-Fey-Realme thanks for sharing your pins!

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                            • Fey Realme
                              Fey Realme last edited by

                              @Joshua-Chennault and @skeletortoise thanks for sharing what you're working on! Its super inspiring to see. Im still struggling with the prompt and prompt burnout from last month lol… the ideas i came up with at the beginning of april feel like too much work….. and so im back to the drawing board looking for something simple to do.

                              So here are some of the most interesting water related stories i found on pinterest
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                              Lee shared “THE 5 story motivations”on a pod a while ago (ive lost where i wrote them down and have been going crazy trying to find the ep) but the ones i remembered were

                              • To escape
                              • to rescue
                              • to win
                              • (to explore maybe?)
                              • (no clue what it might be)

                              It seems like escape and rescue are very common for these sea mythical creature stories.

                              Here are other interesting, less story driven pieces i found, that felt really unique
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                              Ive been hyper focusing on the “underwater” part so i thought i would brainstorm some around the “living” part.

                              Living = eat, sleep, move, family/relationships
                              How do you get food underwater?
                              Where would you sleep underwater?
                              Why would you move?
                              How can i translate a moment in a relationship from my world into this other world?

                              This last question felt the least stressful and probably most promising of all theses, so i thought of some relationship and moments—maybe you can translate a moment from your recent life into the underwater prompt! There is still time for you and me to participate.

                              • parent—young child : kids running out the door to school, one has to rush back for his backpack
                              • young child—young child:
                              • young child—adolescent: adolescent watching over and helping young child play
                              • parent to parent: husband brings pregnant wife food
                                *sisters, brothers, friends, student/teacher, youth/grandparents

                              I think there is real power in simple moments in relationships—while they aren't always complete stories they are very relatable and probably make good portfolio pieces

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                              • Fey Realme
                                Fey Realme @Fey Realme last edited by

                                Heres what ive been throwing together since the other day. How important would it be to render the inerior wall do you think?
                                IMG_5498.jpeg

                                It needs some more rendering all round, doesnt it

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                                • Jason Crowley
                                  Jason Crowley last edited by Jason Crowley

                                  I came up for a few ideas for this prompt so I wanted to create this second piece for HTFYA:

                                  study-and-thumbnail.jpg

                                  It's a husband hermit crab who shows up with a dilapidated doll head as a shell to his disappointed/annoyed wife and amused child. I want to show both amusement with the surrounding fish but also a bit of sadness/concern from the whale who can see that while this looks funny, it's also sad as the doll's head is pollution from humans.

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                                  • Reb Erlik
                                    Reb Erlik @Fey Realme last edited by Reb Erlik

                                    @R-Fey-Realme The mer-sisters idea is cute! Could use more story. Are they getting ready for a special event? What details in their environment could you add to show more about their personalities? Are they getting ready for school with those backpacks? What did they do for homework? Are they going to be late? Maybe there's a "sea bus" arriving that can be seen through their window.

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                                    • Fey Realme
                                      Fey Realme @Reb Erlik last edited by

                                      @reberlik thanks! They are best friends and this is after school, ill try to get some more supporting information in there—very helpful!

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                                      • Erin Hawkins
                                        Erin Hawkins last edited by Erin Hawkins

                                        Hi everyone. I've been thinking about this prompt for a few weeks and I am just now realizing that perhaps my train of thought might have veered too far from the intent of the prompt. I started thinking about living underwater like Jacques Cousteau and then the idea came to me to make a sea turtle version of Jacques Cousteau who wears a red hat and makes underwater films. I haven't started the final art but I've been gathering references and did some quick thumbnails.

                                        Do you think my concept fits the prompt even though it's not depicting humans living underwater? I could always make the art anyway but pass on submitting it for HTFYA. Any opinions/feedback welcome 🙂 Thank you!

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                                        • B-rex
                                          B-rex @Erin Hawkins last edited by

                                          @Erin-Hawkins I don't think it matters what species it is as long as said species is depicted actually living underwater and as long as there is a story that is being told. At least that's what I gathered from the prompt. I like the idea of a sea turtle filmmaker! 🙂

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                                          • Erin Hawkins
                                            Erin Hawkins @B-rex last edited by

                                            @B-rex thank you for your thoughts — I think I’ll move forward with this one and try to get it posted in time for HTFYA. I can’t help myself, I love sea turtles and Jacques Cousteau is so inspiring!

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