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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • B-rex
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      • B-rex
        B-rex last edited by

        This was a fun prompt! Wish I had not procrastinated but I’m excited for next month’s critique 🙂Brenda Alavez_Food Truck.jpg

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          Sara_C @Juleesa last edited by

          @Juleesa such a clever and fun interpretation, I really love it!

          https://www.saracorren.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/saracorren/

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              • lizardillo
                lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                Hiya everyone. I've not been active on SVS for a little while but I listened to the podcast the other day where Lee was talking about this prompt and he described almost the exact image I drew in 2022! So I thought I would submit it 😂 It probably won't count as it's over 2 years old but I couldn't miss the chance to submit it after I heard his description! This is "Chaffy's BirdBox" (the bird inside is a Chaffinch - I'm from the UK).

                Any feedback and critique always welcome and it would be interesting to redraw it based on the critique and see the difference.

                Thank you!!
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                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                  lizardillo @lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                  @lizardillo He says it near the end of Is My Work Ready for Market?
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                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                  • annastenger
                    annastenger @maarcos.l last edited by

                    @maarcos-l This took me a beat to take it all in but then I chuckled put loud 😂

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                      annastenger @Tash last edited by

                      @Tash Your storytelling is hilarious👍

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                        annastenger @Sunniva last edited by

                        @Sunniva This is beautiful and super clear! Take or leave my thoughts: Some of the folks on the ground look a little floaty because the shadows are so subtle. They don’t need to be darker but my brain wants them a little more solid under the feet of the figures.

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                          annastenger @Juleesa last edited by

                          @Juleesa this is so clever and well done!

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                          • MarcRobinson
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                            Hi Guys. There have been so many fun and unique takes on this months prompt. Some of them are super clever and I wish I'd thought of them beforehand! This is my illustration for July. I had the idea of a truck selling "Food for Thought" and even though we know it's not very good for us, we keep going back for a second helping 😉

                            Keep up the great work guys.

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                              LauraA SVS OG @B-rex last edited by

                              @B-rex Baahaahaa!

                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                              http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                LauraA SVS OG @MarcRobinson last edited by

                                @MarcRobinson This is deep! And well done.

                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                  LauraA SVS OG @Larue last edited by

                                  @Larue The mama and baby aloe and the scorpion!

                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                  http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                  • LauraA
                                    LauraA SVS OG @Sunniva last edited by

                                    @Sunniva I like this! The feel is somewhere between Lois Lenski and Marc Chagall. And the concept is similar to the one I couldn't finish, so I'll be interested to hear what they have to say.

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                    • MarcRobinson
                                      MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

                                      @LauraA hey, thanks!

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                                      • Ivana Ševčík Miklošková
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                                        Hi guys, my first picture uploaded here ☺️
                                        My food truck is placed in North pole, where is person starving to death trying to get somewhere close to civilization and suddenly he sees the food truck 😳 (made from old shipwreck) guess polar bear likes this place too, but he is confused, cause there is bear hand hanging …

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                                          • Karen Hobart
                                            Karen Hobart @Juleesa last edited by

                                            @Juleesa I love this one. Amazing how differently all our brains work!

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