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    July 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Tash
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      Natasha Banks. HTFYA July_20240629_143918_0000.png

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      • Oana
        Oana @LauraA last edited by

        @LauraA So sorry about your arm, hope you are well soon! I like how the image turned out, itโ€™s much clearer than the first version and itโ€™s a fun idea ๐Ÿ™‚

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        • maarcos.l
          maarcos.l last edited by

          Here's my entry for this month, hope you like it!

          Food Truck.jpg

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            • B-rex
              B-rex last edited by

              This was a fun prompt! Wish I had not procrastinated but Iโ€™m excited for next monthโ€™s critique ๐Ÿ™‚Brenda Alavez_Food Truck.jpg

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                Sara_C @Juleesa last edited by

                @Juleesa such a clever and fun interpretation, I really love it!

                https://www.saracorren.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/saracorren/

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                      Hiya everyone. I've not been active on SVS for a little while but I listened to the podcast the other day where Lee was talking about this prompt and he described almost the exact image I drew in 2022! So I thought I would submit it ๐Ÿ˜‚ It probably won't count as it's over 2 years old but I couldn't miss the chance to submit it after I heard his description! This is "Chaffy's BirdBox" (the bird inside is a Chaffinch - I'm from the UK).

                      Any feedback and critique always welcome and it would be interesting to redraw it based on the critique and see the difference.

                      Thank you!!
                      Liz_Orton_FoodTruck_SVS_July24.jpg

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo @lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                        @lizardillo He says it near the end of Is My Work Ready for Market?
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                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • annastenger
                          annastenger @maarcos.l last edited by

                          @maarcos-l This took me a beat to take it all in but then I chuckled put loud ๐Ÿ˜‚

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                            annastenger @Tash last edited by

                            @Tash Your storytelling is hilarious๐Ÿ‘

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                              annastenger @Sunniva last edited by

                              @Sunniva This is beautiful and super clear! Take or leave my thoughts: Some of the folks on the ground look a little floaty because the shadows are so subtle. They donโ€™t need to be darker but my brain wants them a little more solid under the feet of the figures.

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                                annastenger @Juleesa last edited by

                                @Juleesa this is so clever and well done!

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                                • MarcRobinson
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                                  Hi Guys. There have been so many fun and unique takes on this months prompt. Some of them are super clever and I wish I'd thought of them beforehand! This is my illustration for July. I had the idea of a truck selling "Food for Thought" and even though we know it's not very good for us, we keep going back for a second helping ๐Ÿ˜‰

                                  Keep up the great work guys.

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                                  • LauraA
                                    LauraA SVS OG @B-rex last edited by

                                    @B-rex Baahaahaa!

                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                    http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                    • LauraA
                                      LauraA SVS OG @MarcRobinson last edited by

                                      @MarcRobinson This is deep! And well done.

                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                      http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                      • LauraA
                                        LauraA SVS OG @Larue last edited by

                                        @Larue The mama and baby aloe and the scorpion!

                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                        http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                        • LauraA
                                          LauraA SVS OG @Sunniva last edited by

                                          @Sunniva I like this! The feel is somewhere between Lois Lenski and Marc Chagall. And the concept is similar to the one I couldn't finish, so I'll be interested to hear what they have to say.

                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                                          http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                                          • MarcRobinson
                                            MarcRobinson @LauraA last edited by

                                            @LauraA hey, thanks!

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