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    October 2024 Submissions - How To Fix Your Art

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    • Jeremy Hamann
      Jeremy Hamann @menalkhan last edited by

      @menalkhan I REALLY like how you rendered this one, everything reads really well even without color and has nice depth. Really inspiring style here!

      I dig the outlines around the characters, gives me Paper Mario vibes. I could totally see this art style in an indie platformer game.

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        BetsyElam @Enni Heikura last edited by

        @Enni-Heikura I loved the little video!

        Elizabeth (Betsy) Elam

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        • Enni Heikura
          Enni Heikura @BetsyElam last edited by

          @BetsyElam Oo thank you so much! 😍

          https://www.instagram.com/ennis_illustration/
          https://eeh.pb.gallery/

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          • menalkhan
            menalkhan @Jeremy Hamann last edited by

            @Jeremy-Hamann Thank you so much for the kind words, Jeremy! I'm glad this piece resonated with you, I’m overall fairly happy with how it turned out! And haha, Paper Mario vibes is a fun perspective I hadn’t considered before!

            https://www.menalkhan.com/
            Connect with me → https://linktr.ee/menalkhan

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            • Mariana B.
              Mariana B. @Reb Erlik last edited by

              @Reb-Erlik I love it. I really like the the inking and the charcoal-like texture on the areas painted black

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              • Reb Erlik
                Reb Erlik @Mariana B. last edited by

                @Mariana-B Thanks Mariana! It's actually just a B pencil sketch darkened up in photoshop. I wish I had grouped the values a bit more thoughtfully as you suggested earlier.

                https://www.instagram.com/reb.erlik/

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                • Ellie
                  Ellie @menalkhan last edited by

                  @menalkhan this is so beautiful! And also devastating 😭🥹

                  @harlequinspaceopera
                  Www.harlequinspaceopera.com

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                  • menalkhan
                    menalkhan @Ellie last edited by

                    @Ellie Thank you, Ellie! 🙏🏼

                    https://www.menalkhan.com/
                    Connect with me → https://linktr.ee/menalkhan

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                        • Filip Draskovic
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