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    Crit Welcome: Character Designs x5!

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    • Meg Clayburn
      Meg Clayburn @StudioHannah last edited by

      @StudioHannah I got the turned in feet suggested a disability, that read well. I more mean which way they are facing. At a 3/4 view there should be some overlap. Maybe this drawing helps get across what I’m trying to say? Or I’m just crazy. 🤪IMG_0823.jpeg

      Meg Clayburn

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      • ArtistErin
        ArtistErin last edited by

        I love these! I don't have any suggestions... just noting your clean lines and fantastic characters. Love that Beast... the mask is great! Very cool šŸ™‚

        Erin Richardson
        instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
        www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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        • Kona McDonald
          Kona McDonald last edited by

          Great character designs, they are all very unique to each other, and it's easy to see which character they are representing in Beauty & the Beast.

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          • AthenaBeana
            AthenaBeana @StudioHannah last edited by

            @StudioHannah These are really cool! My favorite is the stick armed one.

            Can I make a suggestion though? The two characters on the ends have a similar color palate with the various shades of browns. Maybe you could give the girl some orange or red on her outfit to be more visually distinct.
            I don't know if this is on purpose, but to me the bully looks very similar to a lot of high school bullies in pop culture. Blond hair, square face, jock look, etc. Maybe consider changing his design somewhat so he doesn't look quite so much like a classic bully.

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            • StudioHannah
              StudioHannah @Meg Clayburn last edited by

              @Meg-Clayburn Aaaah oh, I see what you mean. The drawing helped!

              www.studiohannah.com
              Social:
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              • StudioHannah
                StudioHannah @AthenaBeana last edited by

                @AthenaBeana They come from the same town so I wanted to keep the "we come fro the same poor-ish area and only have so many colors of clothing to choose from" look but I can definitely mess around with them to make them more unique. Thanks for the suggestions!

                www.studiohannah.com
                Social:
                www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
                www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
                www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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                • StudioHannah
                  StudioHannah last edited by

                  Thanks to everyones advice I did a second round for these characters with a bunch of adjustments and I think they look a lot better!

                  Untitled_Artwork.jpg

                  www.studiohannah.com
                  Social:
                  www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
                  www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
                  www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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                  • _sadira_
                    _sadira_ last edited by

                    @StudioHannah great second round for the character lineup! I love how diverse and unique the cast is, all of the character's silhouettes would be easily recognizable not to mention the clear shape language with them.

                    sadira.artstation.com
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                    • ArtistErin
                      ArtistErin @StudioHannah last edited by

                      @StudioHannah I love how you are improving! Working on a character sheet too! And building maquettes šŸ™‚ So fun

                      Erin Richardson
                      instagram.com/erinrichardsondesigns21
                      www.erinrichardsondesigns.com

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                      • StudioHannah
                        StudioHannah @ArtistErin last edited by

                        @ArtistErin I've designed characters and I've sculpted, but I've never made a maquette. You would think that would have crossed over for me by now hahaha - I hope yours go well! I want to see them them you're done!

                        www.studiohannah.com
                        Social:
                        www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
                        www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
                        www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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                        • StudioHannah
                          StudioHannah @_sadira_ last edited by

                          @_sadira_ Thank you so much! 😃

                          www.studiohannah.com
                          Social:
                          www.instagram.com/studiohannahart
                          www.facebook.com/studiohannahart
                          www.YouTube.com/studiohannah

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