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    • Lee Holland
      Lee Holland @mattramsey last edited by

      @mattramsey @leontine @tyler-blake @russ-van-dine Thank you for the comments. I will definitely have a look at making the size of the balloon bigger. I'll post an update in the next day or two.

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      • Dulcie
        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

        Love it, the composition is really dynamic and it's definitely going to be an exciting piece! I also love that you have Ironbridge as a focal point in the background 🙂

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        • Lee Holland
          Lee Holland @Dulcie last edited by

          @Dulcie Thank you Dulcie.

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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG @Leontine last edited by

            This is going to be such a nice image when it's finished. So much fun stuff to look at. Looking forward to seeing the finish on this:)

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              ShereeNorthrup last edited by

              This is going to be such a fun image piece. I love how you are using perspective.

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              • Doha
                Doha last edited by

                Wow, it looks great already. I can't wait to see the final result!
                I am loving the details and the characters.
                Best of luck!

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                • Leontine
                  Leontine last edited by

                  Hey Lee, please no offence. I see a 'small' thing, The balloon on the left looks a bit like a but. LOL Maybe not a problem if you use the right colors...XD

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                  • Lee Holland
                    Lee Holland @Leontine last edited by

                    @Leontine LOL My partner said that it looked like a butt also. So I thought maybe I should change that.thank you.

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                    • Lee Holland
                      Lee Holland last edited by

                      Hi Everyone. Here is the rough drawing finished. I still need to clean it up but thought before I do I would show you all the changes I have made before i go into Painting it. 0_1475780929389_Ironbridge move tree 2.jpg

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                      • mcucchi
                        mcucchi last edited by

                        I love this. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

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                        • smceccarelli
                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Great image, it´s going to be awesome! This is my favorite type of image - in the air, with many planes and depth and a lot going on. Really looking forward to seeing your progress on this one!

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                          • Rich Green
                            Rich Green SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

                            @Lee-Holland - this looks amazing - can not wait to see it painted!!!

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                            • Lee Holland
                              Lee Holland last edited by

                              @mcucchi @smceccarelli @rich-green Thank you for your comments. I will keep posting my progress on this. hope i paint it good enough. I'm still unsure sometimes what colours to choose.

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                              • lmrush
                                lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                Fantastic!

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                                • Lee Holland
                                  Lee Holland last edited by

                                  Hi everyone. I think i have finally finished this image. It took me a while but its done. If anyone has any thought on any improvements that would be great.
                                  0_1476978422625_ironbridge.jpg

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                                  • Lee Holland
                                    Lee Holland last edited by

                                    I was trying to get a rusty look on this area so I put a textured layer on top with the blend mode set to (soft light.)
                                    0_1476978753953_Iron and rust.jpg

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                                    • smceccarelli
                                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                      It looks wonderful!! Really super nice, everything about it is perfect!

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                                      • evilrobot
                                        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                        Amazing work. Great color. Especially the steam and the clouds. You got a great piece here.

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                                        • Rich Green
                                          Rich Green SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

                                          @Lee-Holland Love how this turned out - it is so beautifully rendered out!

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                                          • Lee White
                                            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            very nice!! this is expertly painted and I really love the style.

                                            Since you are working on perspective, the one thing I would encourage you to adjust is the way the cabin is sitting on the deck of the ship. It's actually rotating to the left more than the rest of the boat is. In order to fix that in the drawing stage, make sure the center line for the boat and the cabin line up by drawing through the objects. So if we line it up correctly, we would see a bit more of the face of the cabin. Kinda like this:

                                            0_1476987406638_1476978433628-ironbridge.jpg

                                            Really great work though! I think this one is a keeper! : )

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