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      ShereeNorthrup last edited by

      This is going to be such a fun image piece. I love how you are using perspective.

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      • Doha
        Doha last edited by

        Wow, it looks great already. I can't wait to see the final result!
        I am loving the details and the characters.
        Best of luck!

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        • Leontine
          Leontine last edited by

          Hey Lee, please no offence. I see a 'small' thing, The balloon on the left looks a bit like a but. LOL Maybe not a problem if you use the right colors...XD

          Leontine
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          • Lee Holland
            Lee Holland @Leontine last edited by

            @Leontine LOL My partner said that it looked like a butt also. So I thought maybe I should change that.thank you.

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            • Lee Holland
              Lee Holland last edited by

              Hi Everyone. Here is the rough drawing finished. I still need to clean it up but thought before I do I would show you all the changes I have made before i go into Painting it. 0_1475780929389_Ironbridge move tree 2.jpg

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              • mcucchi
                mcucchi last edited by

                I love this. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Great image, it´s going to be awesome! This is my favorite type of image - in the air, with many planes and depth and a lot going on. Really looking forward to seeing your progress on this one!

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

                    @Lee-Holland - this looks amazing - can not wait to see it painted!!!

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                    • Lee Holland
                      Lee Holland last edited by

                      @mcucchi @smceccarelli @rich-green Thank you for your comments. I will keep posting my progress on this. hope i paint it good enough. I'm still unsure sometimes what colours to choose.

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Fantastic!

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                        • Lee Holland
                          Lee Holland last edited by

                          Hi everyone. I think i have finally finished this image. It took me a while but its done. If anyone has any thought on any improvements that would be great.
                          0_1476978422625_ironbridge.jpg

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                          • Lee Holland
                            Lee Holland last edited by

                            I was trying to get a rusty look on this area so I put a textured layer on top with the blend mode set to (soft light.)
                            0_1476978753953_Iron and rust.jpg

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              It looks wonderful!! Really super nice, everything about it is perfect!

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                              • evilrobot
                                evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                Amazing work. Great color. Especially the steam and the clouds. You got a great piece here.

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                                • Rich Green
                                  Rich Green SVS OG @Lee Holland last edited by

                                  @Lee-Holland Love how this turned out - it is so beautifully rendered out!

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                                  • Lee White
                                    Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                    very nice!! this is expertly painted and I really love the style.

                                    Since you are working on perspective, the one thing I would encourage you to adjust is the way the cabin is sitting on the deck of the ship. It's actually rotating to the left more than the rest of the boat is. In order to fix that in the drawing stage, make sure the center line for the boat and the cabin line up by drawing through the objects. So if we line it up correctly, we would see a bit more of the face of the cabin. Kinda like this:

                                    0_1476987406638_1476978433628-ironbridge.jpg

                                    Really great work though! I think this one is a keeper! : )

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                                    • Lee Holland
                                      Lee Holland @Lee White last edited by Lee Holland

                                      @Lee-White Thank for the critiq lee. I really appreciate your input on this one it took me quite a while. i'll have a look at the perspective And adjust it If I can. This will be a nice piece for my portfolio once everything in right.

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                                      • Lee Holland
                                        Lee Holland last edited by Lee Holland

                                        Thank you @smceccarelli @rich-green @evilrobot It really means a lot to me to get some kind words said about my work. Thank you.

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                                        • Russ Van Dine
                                          Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                          love this, the only thing I would change is the saturationof the bridge work, too black, draws the eye...love the rest of it!

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                                          • Russ Van Dine
                                            Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                            okay, one more, I would like the cabin o the transport closer to us to be lighter and maybe even the same color as the boat portion.

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