Work in progress - Journey/Transport
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Hey Lee, please no offence. I see a 'small' thing, The balloon on the left looks a bit like a but. LOL Maybe not a problem if you use the right colors...XD
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@Leontine LOL My partner said that it looked like a butt also. So I thought maybe I should change that.thank you.
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Hi Everyone. Here is the rough drawing finished. I still need to clean it up but thought before I do I would show you all the changes I have made before i go into Painting it.
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I love this. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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Great image, it´s going to be awesome! This is my favorite type of image - in the air, with many planes and depth and a lot going on. Really looking forward to seeing your progress on this one!
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@Lee-Holland - this looks amazing - can not wait to see it painted!!!
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@mcucchi @smceccarelli @rich-green Thank you for your comments. I will keep posting my progress on this. hope i paint it good enough. I'm still unsure sometimes what colours to choose.
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Fantastic!
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Hi everyone. I think i have finally finished this image. It took me a while but its done. If anyone has any thought on any improvements that would be great.
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I was trying to get a rusty look on this area so I put a textured layer on top with the blend mode set to (soft light.)
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It looks wonderful!! Really super nice, everything about it is perfect!
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Amazing work. Great color. Especially the steam and the clouds. You got a great piece here.
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@Lee-Holland Love how this turned out - it is so beautifully rendered out!
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very nice!! this is expertly painted and I really love the style.
Since you are working on perspective, the one thing I would encourage you to adjust is the way the cabin is sitting on the deck of the ship. It's actually rotating to the left more than the rest of the boat is. In order to fix that in the drawing stage, make sure the center line for the boat and the cabin line up by drawing through the objects. So if we line it up correctly, we would see a bit more of the face of the cabin. Kinda like this:
Really great work though! I think this one is a keeper! : )
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@Lee-White Thank for the critiq lee. I really appreciate your input on this one it took me quite a while. i'll have a look at the perspective And adjust it If I can. This will be a nice piece for my portfolio once everything in right.
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Thank you @smceccarelli @rich-green @evilrobot It really means a lot to me to get some kind words said about my work. Thank you.
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love this, the only thing I would change is the saturationof the bridge work, too black, draws the eye...love the rest of it!
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okay, one more, I would like the cabin o the transport closer to us to be lighter and maybe even the same color as the boat portion.
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@Russ-Van-Dine Hi Russ Thanks for the critic I'll have look over the image over the next couple of days and make some changes. Thanks for all the help.
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This is lovely!
