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    JUNE ILLUSTRATION CONTEST: TREEHOUSE

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    • Will Terry
      Will Terry @Dennis Spaans last edited by

      Hi Dennis - Again - I really like your image - thank you for letting me make a few suggestions...don't feel like you have to use them. πŸ™‚

      @Dennis-Spaans 0_1497735569313_tree-final.jpg

      SVS Instructor
      http://willterry.com/

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      • Dennis Spaans
        Dennis Spaans @Will Terry last edited by Dennis Spaans

        @Will-Terry Hi Will. Thank you for your suggestions. I can see your point. I like using the space more like you suggest so I will look into that. And even though the house itself is tilted forward in my drawing (on purpose) your suggestion gives me reason to adjust the perspective as well, so you're looking at the bottom of the house.

        Again thanks, and I hope I can adjust it in time ;).

        Dennis Spaans
        Website: dscomics.nl
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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        • Cjones
          Cjones last edited by

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          Hey guys!
          So here is my entry. I was trying the best I can to think outside of the box. So here is a character I designed from back in grade school, Cpt. Weird Beard. I figured if he was to have a tree house, it may look a little something like this. I always like to draw night time images because I remember as a kid that bedtime was lame, haha. And always imagined nightfall being a whole new world and mysterious. There were a few things I wish I added, like a parrot frantically clutching onto weird beards shoulder as they zip down the slide. and maybe a kid fishing from the crows nest. Would love to hear feedback. thanks!

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          • Dennis Spaans
            Dennis Spaans @Will Terry last edited by Dennis Spaans

            @Will-Terry Hey Will, so I've been playing with your suggestions and came up with this. Am I going in the right direction, following your advice? Somehow the first looks a bit more peaceful, but I dont like the negative space in it, so the composition of this one is better. ALso, I like to see the house from the bottom, it looks indeed more logical (even though some perspective lines are still a bit off - which I'll fix ;)).

            Anyway, thanks a lot for the guidance/tips :).
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            Dennis Spaans
            Website: dscomics.nl
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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            • Will Terry
              Will Terry @Dennis Spaans last edited by

              @Dennis-Spaans WOW! so much better! πŸ™‚

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              • Dennis Spaans
                Dennis Spaans @Will Terry last edited by

                @Will-Terry Thanks!! I actually altered it more, pushing the left side more to the back. Im not done yet of course with coloring, but I'm quite happy to close the day with this piece. But I don't want to flood this thread with my stuff, so i posted in my own thread if you're interested: WIP Treehouse on abandoned junkyard

                Dennis Spaans
                Website: dscomics.nl
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                • Katrina Fowler
                  Katrina Fowler last edited by

                  Hey all. I've been MIA for long awhile. I'm on the brink of throwing in the towel on ALL things art. I canceled my Photoshop subscription. I moved my studio with the intention of just turning it into my 'office', I canceled my web domain and just have a free Wix site. I've spent the last 4 months searching for a 'real' job. Ya know 9-5 with benefits and PTO... but....I just keep being drawn back.

                  Well this assignment spoke to me. I set some limits on how much time I would put into it. 4 hours Max including sketch design. Limited color palette and simple media. This little piece is ink and water color then digitally enhanced.

                  0_1497917102816_TreeHouseSm_KatrinaFowler.jpg

                  "Never give up! Never surrender!" ~Commander Peter Quincy Taggert

                  http://ziona4000.wixsite.com/katrinafowler

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Katrina Fowler last edited by

                    @Katrina-Fowler Really nice to see you back! - your work is so good....you must not realize how good it is...or believe it when folks tell you - i still remember Lee saying some Extremely positive things about your work when you won the Third Thursday - it was something to the effect of "9 or 10 more images like this and i see a book deal" - i may not be remembering correctly - but i remember thinking Wow she is awesome and he is right - anyways..i hope i'm not making things worse somehow - This new piece looks great! Really nicely done!

                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                    • NoWayMe
                      NoWayMe last edited by NoWayMe

                      Here is mine!!
                      Last minute critiques always welcome πŸ™‚
                      0_1498081713078_Capture d’écran 2017-06-21 aΜ€ 18.47.14.png

                      noemiegionetlandry.squarespace.com
                      noemie_illustration on Instagram

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                      • tombarrettillo
                        tombarrettillo @smceccarelli last edited by

                        @smceccarelli this came out really nice!

                        https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                        • tombarrettillo
                          tombarrettillo @Katrina Fowler last edited by

                          @Katrina-Fowler This is great! I'm a sucker for ink and watercolor. I really like the simplicity.

                          Kinda confused at your "throwing in the towel" comments, but then, I'm new here. Obviously fodder for a new thread. Perhaps you'd like to share?

                          https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                          • tombarrettillo
                            tombarrettillo @NoWayMe last edited by

                            @NoWayMe Nice job on the final! The dappled light looks much better.

                            https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                              @smceccarelli love it!

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                                @Lee-White 0_1497937203225_19250836_10212296107131336_744633824045927445_o.jpg

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • natiwata
                                  natiwata SVS OG @MirkaH last edited by

                                  @MirkaH Really love this! When I was a kid I loved illustrations like this that you could look at a for a long time and see the different stories/scenes taking place.

                                  Nat Iwata
                                  www.iwataillustration.com

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                                  • aska
                                    aska @Katrina Fowler last edited by

                                    @Katrina-Fowler its simply beatiful! and u ve done it in 4 hours... nice πŸ™‚

                                    Aska
                                    www.mugaska.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/mugaska/
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                                    • Lee White
                                      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

                                      These are looking REALLY good guys. I love the creativity you are bringing to the prompt. It's exactly what I had hoped for!

                                      Keep 'em coming!

                                      Cheers,
                                      Lee

                                      SVS Faculty Instructor
                                      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                      • Lee White
                                        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

                                        k, I'm going to go ahead and post these. It's more of a color comp at this point painted mostly with my finger on the laptop trackpad because I forgot my stylus. Not sure how much more time I'll have to mess with it. I did this on the plane which made my wife nervous. haha!

                                        Total time around 1 hour in photoshop

                                        0_1498054368699_Treehouse painting 2.jpg

                                        0_1497965840866_Treehouse painting.jpg

                                        SVS Faculty Instructor
                                        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @Lee White last edited by

                                          @Lee-White Wow! One hour in photoshop sounds so nice πŸ™‚ It looks great.

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • MOO
                                            MOO SVS OG @Katrina Fowler last edited by

                                            @Katrina-Fowler I love this!

                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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