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    Thumbnails for a personal project. PLEASE VOTE! :)

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    • kai satoshi
      kai satoshi last edited by

      thanks for the reply Lee. May I ask a question. When you do your first thumbnail, do you do it more like a sketch where you are mainly attempting to get a basic placement of objects and forms, then do a second version with your value simplification or are you doing a lot of the sketch and values inside the same image because the ones you show (above) seem to have been more than just sketched out. I hope that makes sense. My thinking may be totally wrong so I want to make sure I get it right :). Are thumbnails a basic compositional sketch to get an idea down and then work the value out on the next step or should a thumbnail have all the lighting and arrangement of objects done inside each thumbnail before deciding on which one to take to the next level? I ask because when I did these thumbnails I was more thinking of compositional arrangement within the sketch and a tad of lighting. Each took about 2 to 5 minutes to do I think.

      PS... thank you Lee for giving me your thoughts... and once again, thank you to everyone taking a look. I've never done a forum before so this is awesome to get to talk to people about this. Thanks!!!

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      • R
        Reid Smith last edited by

        I suggest taking the children's book class. There is a lot of info there but it goes over thumbnails. I found them very helpful..

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        • R
          Reid Smith last edited by

          Specifically talking the second video called the book dummy. Truthfully I have not take the entire class...so that is all I can add as a suggestion. Perhaps someone more seasoned can add further advice..

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          • kai satoshi
            kai satoshi last edited by

            Thanks Reid. Yes I took that class. Very good stuff. In that class Jake's thumbnail layouts are very basic and give him an ideal of placement and most of the characters are almost "stick figure like" and with no indication of lighting or direction of light or value. Perhaps its just a personal thing for basic thumbnail sketches? I guess? lol.

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            • Lee White
              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Kris, I typically start with a VERY rough sketch and get the composition worked out. I like to do a lot of them so I don't focus too much on quality at the first stage at all. I do like to use the 5 value system though. It helps keep them more orderly than if I just sketch in pencil. I just focus on camera angle and placement of objects.

              Here's how that first stage might look. These were for a book cover I did last year titled "Electricity". (I've included more info below this image so keep scrolling for more):

              Electricity-roughs.jpg

              Then, once I figure out which ones I actually like I clean them up to present to the client. I ALWAYS do a little write up to let the client know what I am thinking. Here's that stage (more below that):

              Electricity-comps.jpg

              Then once I talk to the client a bit, I submit a final painting and they add type. Here's the finished cover:

              Electricity-Final-with-type.jpg

              SVS Faculty Instructor
              www.leewhiteillustration.com

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Here's another sample by the awesome Chris Sheban (who is going to do a video with us!!!!!! YAY!!!). It shows how he works from the rough all the way to the finish. So he does the value and color in one step. Of course, he is a total pro and knows what he is doing. I would suggest the greyscale route first, and then go to color. Note: I do these color studies AFTER I do the greycale studies. So it's just figuring out what works best for you.

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                • kai satoshi
                  kai satoshi last edited by

                  Excellent. I really appreciate you taking the time to do that. The thumbnails I posted were simply my first step for creating the "idea" of an image. So then I see from your stuff my next step would be solidify the value, then a color study, then rendering. Very nice and very appreciated. Thanks Lee :).
                  ... and thank you to everyone who took the time to write 🙂

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                  • Olivia Hope Shelley
                    Olivia Hope Shelley last edited by

                    I love number 5 and 8! Great Job!!!

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                    • Patty Burke
                      Patty Burke last edited by

                      Without regard to storytelling, just based on visual appeal as a composition, I like #5.

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                      • kai satoshi
                        kai satoshi @Olivia Hope Shelley last edited by

                        @Olivia-Hope-Shelley
                        Thanks Olivia 🙂

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                        • kai satoshi
                          kai satoshi @Patty Burke last edited by

                          @Patty-Burke
                          Thanks Patty.
                          I think I remember you in one of the classes. I can't remember which one (Might have been Composition), but I think it was a sledding/winter scene with the cute little dogs 🙂 Anyway. thanks for letting me borrow your eyes :). thanks

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                          • Maile McCarthy
                            Maile McCarthy @kai satoshi last edited by

                            @Kris-Knight I was immediately drawn to 5 and 8, although on a second look, I'm really liking #7. This looks like a really fun project. I can't wait to see your next steps.

                            Maile

                            Twitter @MaileMcCarthy
                            www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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                            • Charlie Eve Ryan
                              Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              I vote 5 and 8, leaning more towards 8 for adventure appeal and being curious where he is going. Lee's thumbnails are fantastic, loved seeing the progression and the other artist's samples.

                              Happy Creating
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