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    Thumbnails for a personal project. PLEASE VOTE! :)

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    • R
      Reid Smith last edited by

      Specifically talking the second video called the book dummy. Truthfully I have not take the entire class...so that is all I can add as a suggestion. Perhaps someone more seasoned can add further advice..

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      • kai satoshi
        kai satoshi last edited by

        Thanks Reid. Yes I took that class. Very good stuff. In that class Jake's thumbnail layouts are very basic and give him an ideal of placement and most of the characters are almost "stick figure like" and with no indication of lighting or direction of light or value. Perhaps its just a personal thing for basic thumbnail sketches? I guess? lol.

        https://www.facebook.com/kaisatoshiart
        https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCt6tfoLEMU6uZkRzs2KUzVw

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        • Lee White
          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Kris, I typically start with a VERY rough sketch and get the composition worked out. I like to do a lot of them so I don't focus too much on quality at the first stage at all. I do like to use the 5 value system though. It helps keep them more orderly than if I just sketch in pencil. I just focus on camera angle and placement of objects.

          Here's how that first stage might look. These were for a book cover I did last year titled "Electricity". (I've included more info below this image so keep scrolling for more):

          Electricity-roughs.jpg

          Then, once I figure out which ones I actually like I clean them up to present to the client. I ALWAYS do a little write up to let the client know what I am thinking. Here's that stage (more below that):

          Electricity-comps.jpg

          Then once I talk to the client a bit, I submit a final painting and they add type. Here's the finished cover:

          Electricity-Final-with-type.jpg

          SVS Faculty Instructor
          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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          • Lee White
            Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Here's another sample by the awesome Chris Sheban (who is going to do a video with us!!!!!! YAY!!!). It shows how he works from the rough all the way to the finish. So he does the value and color in one step. Of course, he is a total pro and knows what he is doing. I would suggest the greyscale route first, and then go to color. Note: I do these color studies AFTER I do the greycale studies. So it's just figuring out what works best for you.

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            • kai satoshi
              kai satoshi last edited by

              Excellent. I really appreciate you taking the time to do that. The thumbnails I posted were simply my first step for creating the "idea" of an image. So then I see from your stuff my next step would be solidify the value, then a color study, then rendering. Very nice and very appreciated. Thanks Lee :).
              ... and thank you to everyone who took the time to write 🙂

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              • Olivia Hope Shelley
                Olivia Hope Shelley last edited by

                I love number 5 and 8! Great Job!!!

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                • Patty Burke
                  Patty Burke last edited by

                  Without regard to storytelling, just based on visual appeal as a composition, I like #5.

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                  • kai satoshi
                    kai satoshi @Olivia Hope Shelley last edited by

                    @Olivia-Hope-Shelley
                    Thanks Olivia 🙂

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                    • kai satoshi
                      kai satoshi @Patty Burke last edited by

                      @Patty-Burke
                      Thanks Patty.
                      I think I remember you in one of the classes. I can't remember which one (Might have been Composition), but I think it was a sledding/winter scene with the cute little dogs 🙂 Anyway. thanks for letting me borrow your eyes :). thanks

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                      • Maile McCarthy
                        Maile McCarthy @kai satoshi last edited by

                        @Kris-Knight I was immediately drawn to 5 and 8, although on a second look, I'm really liking #7. This looks like a really fun project. I can't wait to see your next steps.

                        Maile

                        Twitter @MaileMcCarthy
                        www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          I vote 5 and 8, leaning more towards 8 for adventure appeal and being curious where he is going. Lee's thumbnails are fantastic, loved seeing the progression and the other artist's samples.

                          Happy Creating
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